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When She Becomes a Kitten

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I painted this the other day for all people who love dressing as cats.

Your eyes whisper, they talk , They walk me to the story in your mind, They tell me every thought you have, Every thought from deep inside, About your desire, your yearn, Your deepest wish for us right now, How you want to be a kitten, And purr and paw and meow, And your vixen lips, they’re ready to leap, Ready to bite, kiss and moan, I love your layered red locks my love, How you’re my tiger to own, I love your eyes, my beautiful girl, I love your ears, your mouth, your act, I love when you dress in that special dress, And you become my cat.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/16/2018 9:00:00 PM
Another one from a passionate heart. Also one for all aspiring poets to check out for ideas on how to be original and sincere and further the cause of Romance. David in NZ was impressed. Still hope for Australians through their poets.
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Date: 9/15/2018 8:23:00 PM
a wow Meow!!! Luscious!
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Date: 9/14/2018 4:22:00 PM
Wow Lewis...how talented you are! An artist as well as a poet! Your wonderful poem compliments your lovely artwork superbly! : )
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Date: 9/14/2018 8:00:00 AM
SWEET! ;)
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Date: 9/14/2018 7:14:00 AM
Puurrrfectly! consuming my friend...love & kitty cats...great painting too...^WW^
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Date: 9/13/2018 11:44:00 PM
This steamy missive has smoke rising from her page. Beautifully done, Lewis.
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Date: 9/13/2018 10:05:00 PM
Your verses sizzle, Lewis. A hot, juicy poem ripe with desire, lust and passion and so lusciously expressed. Love the temptress imagery that your express with delicious appreciation. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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