When Poetry Threatens

There is a greasy odor in the air

At the window
across the room

the diaphanous wings of a fly

peal off accompaniment,
--a staccato--contradictory notes

to the stretched rays of a dying afternoon sun

falling  on the face of my otherwise muse

And in her countenance
all I can see
is the potential of a growling dog ....
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De Beaulieu Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 11:58 AM
Hello Dalton Moss, the dog is growling for your attention. It is nice to meet you. Enjoy your day my friend.
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November 7, 2020 at 12:49 PM
Hello Dalton Moss, Your welcome, you are welcome Dalton. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. So nice to meet you my friend.
Moss Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 2:21 PM
What a nice way to say "get your but in gear and write something!" You're very intuitive--thanks!
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2020 at 3:50 PM
this is excellent. FAVE
Moss Avatar
February 26, 2020 at 10:39 PM
Thank you Andrea! You - are - too - kind!
One Avatar
February 15, 2020 at 6:59 AM
then it is not poetry.... well written..
Moss Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 12:37 PM
Thank you Silent One!
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