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When Poetry Threatens

There is a greasy odor in the air At the window across the room the diaphanous wings of a fly peal off accompaniment, --a staccato--contradictory notes to the stretched rays of a dying afternoon sun falling on the face of my otherwise muse And in her countenance all I can see is the potential of a growling dog ....

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Date: 11/6/2020 11:58:00 AM
Hello Dalton Moss, the dog is growling for your attention. It is nice to meet you. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/7/2020 12:49:00 PM
Hello Dalton Moss, Your welcome, you are welcome Dalton. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. So nice to meet you my friend.
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Dalton Moss
Date: 11/6/2020 2:21:00 PM
What a nice way to say "get your but in gear and write something!" You're very intuitive--thanks!
Date: 2/26/2020 3:50:00 PM
this is excellent. FAVE
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Dalton Moss
Date: 2/26/2020 10:39:00 PM
Thank you Andrea! You - are - too - kind!
Date: 2/15/2020 6:59:00 AM
then it is not poetry.... well written..
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Dalton Moss
Date: 2/17/2020 12:37:00 PM
Thank you Silent One!

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