Paula Goldsmith Poet Monoku

When Plans Dont Go To Plan

went out in a new outfit and car, to find I had a flat tire

 
Date Written: 8/24/2020

2 Place     When plans dont go to plan Contest Judged: 8/29/2020        Sponsored by: Silent One

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Andrea Dietrich August 30, 2020 at 2:25 PM that is exactly how it always seems to go!! Congrats, Paula. Paula Goldsmith August 31, 2020 at 9:10 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Have a wonderful day...................

Gershon Wolf August 29, 2020 at 8:57 PM Your tire must really have been flat-tered! lol. Congrats on a great win, Paula, with a really humorous anecdote-- all in just 17 syllables. Way to go! ~ Gershon Paula Goldsmith August 31, 2020 at 9:09 AM Thank You, for writing, for your congratulations and for your very kind words. Have a wonderful day...................

Anne-Lise Andresen August 29, 2020 at 1:06 PM - Congratulations on your great winning line, Paula :) - // Anne-Lise :) Paula Goldsmith August 29, 2020 at 1:32 PM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Have a wonderful day with hugs...................

Sam Kauffman August 29, 2020 at 11:20 AM Oh no! Hope you had AAA - not a commercial plug! Congratulations Paula on your win with this very witty write illustrating Murphy's Law! Paula Goldsmith August 29, 2020 at 1:31 PM Thank You, for reading, for writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like this one. Have a wonderful day.................

Eve Roper August 29, 2020 at 10:43 AM Love the imagery in just one line Monoku, Paula. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Paula Goldsmith August 29, 2020 at 11:12 AM Thank You, for writing, for your congratulations and for your kind words. Glad you like this. Have a wonderful weekend with hugs...................

Kim Rodrigues August 29, 2020 at 6:28 AM Congratulations! Paula Goldsmith August 29, 2020 at 10:24 AM Thanks for you note and for your congratulations. Enjoy your weekend........................

Krish Radhakrishna August 29, 2020 at 4:33 AM Terrible even to think about! I would phone road side assistance! Congrats on your win! Paula Goldsmith August 29, 2020 at 10:23 AM Thanks, for writing and for your congratulations. Yes, call for help. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful day.......................

Carolyn Devonshire August 29, 2020 at 4:24 AM Figures you'd get a flat when you were dressed up and not prepared to change a tire, Paula. Congrats on your win! Paula Goldsmith August 29, 2020 at 10:21 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Going out and a having a tire problem, is no fun. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful day...................

Line Gauthier August 29, 2020 at 4:24 AM well penned, ouch ~ Paula Goldsmith August 29, 2020 at 10:21 AM Thanks for you note. So glad you like it. Enjoy your day writing away..........................

Silent One August 29, 2020 at 2:49 AM Damn! Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Paula Goldsmith August 29, 2020 at 10:15 AM Thank You, for reading, for writing and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win. Glad you like this one. Have a wonderful day...................

D.W. Rodgers August 28, 2020 at 9:58 AM Too true, it never rains but it pours. When our daughter was teaching in Thailand one of the Thai teachers said "It's not true that Thais don't make plans. We do but sometimes things change." Paula Goldsmith August 28, 2020 at 11:36 AM Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad you like this one. Yes, plans can and do change. Have a wonderful day................

Joanna Daniel August 25, 2020 at 5:54 AM Must have been frustrating, Paula..well written:) Paula Goldsmith August 25, 2020 at 9:10 AM Thanks for writing. A flat tire is always frustrating. Enjoy your day....................

Tom Cunningham August 24, 2020 at 2:38 PM Yikes, nothing worse Paula. Hope you carried a spare. Good luck Tom Paula Goldsmith August 24, 2020 at 3:07 PM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this. Always a spare. Enjoy your day writing away...............

Anne-Lise Andresen August 24, 2020 at 11:43 AM - Really annoying ... hope a handsome guy comes to help you :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Paula Goldsmith August 24, 2020 at 11:59 AM Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Have a wonderful day with a hug..................

Heidi Sands August 24, 2020 at 10:54 AM The part of the plan not planned. Good one :) Paula Goldsmith August 24, 2020 at 11:15 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this one. Enjoy your day writing away...............

Kim Rodrigues August 24, 2020 at 10:22 AM Attired but no tire! Paula Goldsmith August 24, 2020 at 11:14 AM Thanks for your note. Have a wonderful day writing away.....................