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When Our Eyes First Met - a Collaboration With Frederic Parker

When our eyes first met, in an evening's glow of twilight the moon was rising, the world disappeared I saw only you we enjoyed a calm gentle merriment as love's breath crossed the unmeasurable distance where we found a glistening glimmer of sensual glint no words were spoken, none were needed your eyes invited an enduring treasured moment of created memory which will last through the harvest of our day's sweet nectared blossoms and light the dim-lit nights of entangled romantic interludes of welcomed fervor wrapped in the wondrous arms of wonder found with the silhouette of lovers painted in the moon-lit dark where our souls reveal their ambrosia, without fear in love's timeless universe of warm adoring realms of restive emotion found in the eyes of paradise from our first greeting when our eyes first met sundown raised a golden toast to star-show’s lovesome muse vesper’s champagne goosebumped in our veins and filled a vacant streambed with a shifted stream a plenished ribbon tying the juicy bow of our dewy dream as sparks rained down we fell like two falling stars showered in the shimmer of our dark-sky eyes ready for the heady rush we rushed headlong tipsy on the musk of jasmine air a flower tucked behind one ear petal-soft lips in search of honey sips with readiness flaunted like an arched red bloom as shadows supple like summer vines seized the Venus light costly the mossy mat beneath our sleek backs while the phlox moon blushed a pinkened swoon with our surrender when our eyes first met west of sunset the evening-star stardusted our gaze I saw only you.. as rainbow seasons whirl into December’s pearl hair once raven long since faded to dove vintage heartbeats collect in the past of the hourglass tipping the balance in the fatality of time yet - the old night hangs a Yule moon as full as my arms are of you - still - I still see only you Frederic Parker and Susan Ashley (a collaboration) August 28, 2021 ~ Poem Of The Day ~ August 29, 2021 *Celebrated on Frederic Parker's page* Poet’s note: Dearest Frederic, it was both a pleasure and an honor to collaborate with you on this lovely poem. Your ardent artistry swept me up in a romantic dance across the page with your poetic muse. Thank you, dear poet, dear friend, for yet another creative poetic experience. *costly: splendid; lavish; sumptuous; plush; precious

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Date: 8/7/2022 11:34:00 PM
An electric moment when two pairs of eyes met. They saw nothing else, but just each other. They spoke nothing, as no words were needed . The memory of that very moment is treasured through long years....still enchanting. Susan, you know how to mesmerize people with your pen.... a true magic wand in your possession. Both of you wielded your pen to create magic, I must say. Both of your thoughts blended so well that it is difficult to decide whose lines are more appealing....
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Susan Ashley
Date: 8/14/2022 8:01:00 PM
Dearest Valsa, my sweet friend and grand poetess, your comments are truly splendid, what a honor you bestow upon Frederic and me. Your precious words are received with my deepest appreciation. I enjoyed the creative experience of joining pens with my dear friend, Frederic, his soulful artistry invites and entices my muse in the most wonderful way. Thank you, you are ever appreciated! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 9/13/2021 9:59:00 AM
This is such a fine-tuned romantic collaboration Susan & Frederic. I love it when two writers find themselves with ease on the same wavelength. ~ Congratultaions on being awarded p.o.t.d. ~ Warm regards & hugs // paul
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Susan Ashley
Date: 9/17/2021 7:39:00 AM
Dear Paul, if anyone knows what makes for a creative, emotionally rich, beautiful collaboration it's you! The joining of two, or sometimes three pens (as with Robert, Teppo and myself), can produce the most artistic and lovely results. Indeed, I love it when two writers find themselves with ease on the same wavelength. Your amazing insight and heartwarming congrats are held in my deepest appreciation, my wonderful friend. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
Date: 9/10/2021 2:58:00 PM
Dearest Susan, I am always dazzled when reading your poems with the most enchanting and fascinating imageries! And this poem is a romantic, dreamy, brilliant creation I am again being mesmerized! Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD with this gem - marvellous and stunning! Love and best wishes ~ Mala
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Susan Ashley
Date: 9/17/2021 7:31:00 AM
My dearest Mala, the heartwarming beauty of your comments and sincere congrats touch me very deeply. Thank you for your gracious and precious friendship and for the stunning poetry spilled from your gifted pen, both are truly savored and appreciated. Warmest wishes and hugs, wondrous poetess.. ~Susan
Date: 9/1/2021 10:25:00 AM
Yes, a sweetly romantic collaboration!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 9/2/2021 8:20:00 AM
James, thank your both your wonderful visit and lovely comment., it's great to see you again! It is a wonderful creative experience to join muses and share inspiration with my dear friend, Frederic. I am ever enchanted by his soulful heartstrings. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
Date: 8/31/2021 2:52:00 PM
This is beautiful...dreamy and alive with intimate brilliance. I love it. God bless you always. Love, Gina
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Susan Ashley
Date: 9/2/2021 8:13:00 AM
Dearest Regina, thank you for your gracious visit. I cherish your lovely response to our collaboration. Frederic is such an inspiration and I am ever appreciative when our muses fuse in the beauty of poetic romance. I admire and relish the passionate magic of his expressive pen. Warmest wishes, my lovey sister in poetic friendship.. ~Susan
Date: 8/30/2021 1:39:00 AM
Congratulations on poem of the day, Susan, shown on Frederic’s page. A beautiful collaboration poem, such a romantic duet, poetry at it's best… Belle
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Susan Ashley
Date: 9/2/2021 8:04:00 AM
Dear Belle, your beautiful comments and heartwarming congrats are so wonderful to receive. I credit my inspiring friend, Frederic, for initiating this romantic duet of our muses. His passionate pen stirs my creative embers to a flare and for that, I am ever grateful. Warmest wishes, my lovely friend.. ~Susan
Date: 8/29/2021 12:32:00 PM
This to me is truly a fantastic and wonderfully inspiring creation! Congratulations to both truly talented and creative poets on this gem and its most well deserved recognition as the Soup's new POTD.. Exceptional and marvelous are very apt descriptive words to describe. A fav.. God bless...
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Susan Ashley
Date: 9/2/2021 7:53:00 AM
My dear friend, thank you for your beautiful comments and grand congrats! I know how much you appreciate collaborations and the wonders of sharing a creative muse. There is a special kind of magic that happens when two muses join as one and it is always an enchanting experience to compose poetry with my inspiring friend, Frederic. I cherish your friendship, Robert, and the honor of your fav. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/29/2021 12:32:00 PM
Soupmail sent to you my dear friend..
Date: 8/28/2021 10:20:00 PM
How romantic! What a lovely collaboration by two wonderful poets!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 9/2/2021 7:45:00 AM
Dearest Jennifer, thank you for your wonderful visit and beautiful comments. It is always an honor and a pleasure to create poetry with my inspiring friend, Frederic. I will visit your poetic gems very soon.. I haven't been able to be here very much for the last few months. Warmest wishes to you, my poetry sister.. ~Susan
Date: 8/28/2021 2:02:00 PM
Susan, dear friend, dear poet thank you for both your friendship and the gift of your poetry to give life and color to our poem, I am in awe of your poetry and am grateful to you for allowing me the pleasure of joining our poetry
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Susan Ashley
Date: 9/2/2021 7:38:00 AM
Frederic, thank you for your heartfelt words and for sharing in the wonder of creativity with me. Your soulful heartstrings strum poetry ever so lyrically. I adore your poetic expression and I'm thrilled our muses fused in rapturous romance. Thank you for sharing the beauty of your poet's heart and passionate pen with me, both are ever enchanting. Your artistic friendship is cherished, dear poet, dear friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 8/28/2021 12:00:00 PM
What a beautiful poem, Susan; your imagery and symbolism are stunning, and your words flow effortlessly to create a cornucopia of fascinating sceneries. Have a great weekend
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Susan Ashley
Date: 8/28/2021 4:59:00 PM
Dear Lasaad, I cherish your beautiful and thoughtful comments. Thank you for being the first to remark on our collaboration. Your precious thoughts are uplifting. The opportunity for me to create poetry with my wonderful friend and inspiring poet, Frederic, is a both a pleasure and an honor. I hope you have a great weekend as well. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

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