When nowadays everything is seemed cringe
When someone makes a mocking comment about your thing you put effort in,
It's much more dragging,
than looks or personalities.
I worked and did.
I sweat and cried.
But was also relieved, happy and amazed.
Every energie of mine, every focus, every motivation.
,,yours look very good!"
,,Ah, thank you"
,,No, her's doesn't look good. Our's better, we can talk much more openly when we present."
Is my writing bad? My sketch?
I know I can't sketch but I tried.
I thought you would criticize which is okay, but why did you have to say that?
Did I do too much? Is it unfair to others? Is it cringe?
And it comes from someone,
who I had a love was done.
But jelousy? I never felt gladly that kind of gun.
I would've never said even out of curiosity.
Because my past self,
would've never treated you that but rather touch
dust on the shelves.
Copyright © Adna Demiri | Year Posted 2024
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