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When North Goes South

I want to run away from the stares when our friends don’t see you there Instead I walk confidently like I don’t care But inside I feel like life’s unfair Why did I believe you when you said we’d always be a pair I tried I begged and pleaded Yet you pulled away said I wasn’t what you needed So down a different path we both retreated The outcome not my choice it couldn’t be debated All those years together feel like they’ve been wasted I guess for you somehow love faded Still a broken heart can do more than weep It can rise up and walk down a different street It can savour life without you there are new people to meet I have places to go and meals to eat There are others who will quicken my heart beat I choose a life that's sweet No girl it’s not easy being through I can’t ever forget you If only you had meant it when you said “I do” Now my horizon is empty I've lost my perfect view You were the North Star that I was guided too All those moments felt like they were far to few Was it all just an illusion did I ever really know you It seems in this case True North wasn't true to the south off you flew. Fictional account inspired by Bernadette Mullick’s poem titled BTS Dedication.

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Date: 5/2/2020 12:58:00 PM
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Date: 5/2/2020 12:56:00 PM
An introspective piece of what could have been ... but didn't. A lot of people can relate to this, I'm sure. And for those that can't your words took us there, nonetheless. Well done (sometimes our North just happens later in life)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/2/2020 12:59:00 PM
Hi Timothy, alway good to get your perspective. ;0)
Date: 4/23/2020 12:51:00 AM
Yes found one, a poem, i have not read, and i know there is lots more,,Regarding the subject matter, and diversity, no one does it better than you...Stay Safe my friend....
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/23/2020 8:40:00 AM
Thanks Harry. ;0)
Date: 3/23/2020 6:16:00 PM
Hi Richard, another poetic gem from your pen. Your words held me fast from beginning to end. It brings out emotions from the reader. You always manage to do that my friend. Another wonderful write from your golden pen. A fictional account, written so well that it reads real. Stay blessed Richard. Your friend always....Mike.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/23/2020 7:50:00 PM
Thanks Mike.;0)
Date: 3/6/2020 12:00:00 PM
What a powerful story...I see it was inspired. Even though it's fictional... her loss, I say.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/6/2020 12:42:00 PM
Hi Eileen, mostly fictional with a bit of reliance on a previous unsuccessful relationship. Hugs Rick.
Date: 2/17/2020 8:23:00 AM
Thanks all for the visits and comments.
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Date: 2/17/2020 6:47:00 AM
They say it's better to have loved and lost then to never have love at all. If only we could go to the ER after we fall.
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Date: 2/13/2020 11:54:00 AM
Painful poem, so often very true. Good read great Title and image. hope its not related to you.
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Date: 2/5/2020 1:49:00 PM
Another brilliant title and carry-through of the concept at the end of the poem! Excellent!
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Date: 1/19/2020 6:09:00 PM
Hello Richard … so much feeling, sadness, and confusion before the door opens to a brand new world and memories - thank you this great verse Richard - Lindsay
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Date: 1/19/2020 4:45:00 PM
such a poignant write...many, if not all can relate to the heartbreak of lost love... glad it's fictional, but one would never know by how well you crafted this one, you stepped into the part of the one with the broken heart... kudos Rick... wonderful write! hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/19/2020 5:35:00 PM
Thanks Sandra.
Date: 1/19/2020 2:22:00 PM
I could feel the parting here, and love the use of the word "retreated." This really carries the mood of breaking up.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/19/2020 2:49:00 PM
Thanks J.R.
Date: 1/18/2020 6:11:00 PM
Wow, that says it all. Sad but with feeling.
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Date: 1/18/2020 12:29:00 PM
Nearly 4 years away and today I passed by the Poetrysoup and felt like reading one of your poems. The whole poem is sad but knowing how you are capable of allowing the reader to enjoy every bit of your poem. I am happy to its a fiction. Beautiful. Happy New Year. Hope to see u soon. Terry xoxo
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Date: 1/18/2020 10:43:00 AM
Excellent ink Rick, I'm so glad its fictional although there are many that can relate, Hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/17/2020 8:25:00 AM
Thanks to all for commenting, I will drop by to visit each of you. ;0)
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Date: 1/17/2020 8:08:00 AM
You captured the ache of loss love here excellently. Well written. Hugs
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Date: 1/17/2020 7:38:00 AM
A sad love story - so sad when a partner leaves, and the other sill loves him or her. Your poem is awesome and so glad it is fiction. I have just posted a third poem of my superheroes, "And so it begins" if you have time to read it, I'd enjoy your feedback Rick. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/16/2020 9:21:00 AM
I was hoping this poem was not about you. I read it and found out that it was not. It makes me feel better knowing that you are still everyone's happy Richard. It was a very good poem. I really liked it. Your friend..... Roger
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Date: 1/15/2020 9:38:00 PM
Love the part about all being an illusion ---"Did I ever know you?"... And the answer seems to me be: Yes and No. I did; but now I sure don't... Does that mean that I thought I knew you, but not really?... Much to nosh on here, my friend. Thanks, Gershon
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Date: 1/15/2020 12:19:00 PM
Nice write Rick, glad it's fictional, I thought so... you have a strong bond with your wife so I thought this to be unlikely to be true, glad I was right.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/15/2020 5:48:00 PM
Thanks John, all is well on the home front. ;0)
Date: 1/15/2020 12:12:00 PM
A sad verse of a love lost Richard, thankfully its a fictional write. Well written. Tom
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/15/2020 5:47:00 PM
Thanks Tom.

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