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When Ned came to the island with his dog greeted by the men in bulging Speedos, some he knew and many that he didn't he saw the tip of an enormous iceberg the submerged of which would quickly be revealed men and women would die in agony and pain. Ned wanted to rise and rail and shout ...urine on the steps up to the Capitol never silent...always loud and angry in counterpoint to their deafening silence. And that accomplished his and their agenda so that in these days the trigger has become accepted, resigned to, complacent as if everything has now been put aright. The problem is that many still are suffering... but now the kettle's taken off the boil. And all that's left is us to brew the tea . © Richard A. Martin, Jr., MD, CPC, 2016

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Date: 9/22/2020 6:16:00 AM
Wonderful emotions shown in this sonnet. Enjoyed reading it
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Dr Richard A Martin Jr
Date: 9/22/2020 7:39:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 9/21/2020 1:47:00 PM
This is US voicing our frustrations.... we came a long way and still have a long way.... Expressive....
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Date: 9/21/2020 1:55:00 PM
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Date: 9/17/2020 3:34:00 PM
Powerful voice. I like the great sense of frustration in the last line, And all that's left is for us to brew the tea...Something so prosaic to represent all the pain and continue the sustained metaphor of gun violence? ''Trigger'''a metonymy?
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Date: 9/17/2020 9:39:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 9/17/2020 12:43:00 PM
I love the rythmn of the story telling. Impactful phrases and complete
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Date: 9/17/2020 9:40:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 9/17/2020 12:16:00 PM
This is really good, I loke it
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Date: 9/17/2020 9:42:00 PM
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Date: 9/17/2020 9:40:00 PM
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Date: 9/17/2020 12:05:00 PM
Super poem
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Date: 9/17/2020 9:40:00 PM
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Date: 9/17/2020 11:34:00 AM
um Okay.... a bit too vulgar for my taste
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Dr Richard A Martin Jr
Date: 9/17/2020 9:42:00 PM
Hummm...they say one must have knowledge of vulgarity in order to see it. I’m sorry...

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