When Nature Smiles

When nature smiles, she kindly brightens up our days. When nature smiles, most splendidly she drifts for miles - removing skies of gloom or haze. We feel her grace in warming rays when nature smiles. For A Strand (1074) Poetry Contest
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Norton Avatar
February 12, 2022 at 7:04 AM
Conveys well the feelings of nature. Indeed, nature does brighten up our days. Thanks Andrea. Congratulations on your great win. Your friend, shoeshine boy.
Sefunmi Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 3:04 AM
This poem brings a warm smile to my face. Lovely write!
Duncan Avatar
January 16, 2013 at 8:42 PM
Love it,,,, and I see you won ;} awesome,, going in my fav's ;} you have a blessed day Andrea.
Cavanaugh Avatar
December 27, 2012 at 11:03 PM
Beautiful poem. I see from the comments that it is a winner. Congratulations. It reads like a winner as well.
A   Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 10:16 PM
Andrea,, congratulations with your awesome win in Debbie's "Rondelets OR Simply 7 lines" contest... always~ pd
Kendrick Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 10:09 AM
Congrats on your great win..Way to go..Sara
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 5:56 AM
Congratulations on your Hm Andy sweetie xx
Goodwin Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 11:36 PM
I like this, very nicely written. -- Sean
Austin Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 8:46 AM
Nature is smiling on Saginaw today - bright sunshine. Hope things are this way up where you stay. Love, daver
Maverick Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 11:45 PM
A thought to think on here Andrea ( A really natural piece from you ) Pleased to read today.."
Babcock Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 7:35 PM
Wonderful poem. soup mail
Horne Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 3:06 PM
a sure winner here, my friend - love it
Zerbst Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 12:35 PM
This is good; it will do well for you I am sure. You have a great day and enjoy those smiles :)
Gasun Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 10:38 AM
I extremely love both the feelings and images in your 7 lines verse/poem my dear friend, Andrea! It's indeed superbly wonderful when nature smiles. I hope nature will smile in our country now ;(. Kudos! A winning piece for sure! Wish you all the best always! love and big hugs, Leonora
May Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 5:15 PM
very good write Andrea...best wishes...love
Williams Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 4:03 PM
Andrea love this one, great fun form, I have just posted one but don't think I will enter it for the contest...David
Ober Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 12:07 PM
I don't think you're capable of writing anything that isn't awesome! Debbie will love this. I wish nature would smile in Canada today :)
Pettit Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 10:21 AM
Nature must have frowned on us for the past couple of days. We have had a lot of rain here in New Jersey. Your poem says a lot in just seven lines.
Goller Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 8:11 AM
Beautiful naturem beautiful expressed poem.Thanks for sharing it.God bless you, Hugs!Erich
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December 11, 2012 at 5:36 AM
this one just brightened and warmed my day, andrea! it's frosty and freezing where I am (literally not metaphorically haha) did you try to send me soupmail because I haven't received it, don't say all the problems with soupmail are starting up again!!
Sathasivam Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 11:37 PM
Beautiful write of nature. When nature smiles, peace flows in this world. Enjoyed Tfs.
Macmillan Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 8:37 PM
What a graceful write, Andrea! I loved how you went about this contest. You know me, I'm a buzzing bee who likes to prod writers .... I want MORE! I know, I know, this is enough for the contest, but I see this as a series... when nature scowls, when nature weeps... come on, girl.... try 1 or 2 more? Shoo me, lol, go ahead. I know you're running ragged and have no time and I add to your list of to do's. What kinda friend am I? Ha! A poet friend who sees a few more verses in ya! TICKLE TICKLE :)
Johnson Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 1:51 PM
The sun is out, the temperature's down. Natures wearing both a smile and a frown. Winters here all dressed in white. Let's face it, without snow, it just aint right. :) Good luck. Such an uplifting poem Andrea.
La France Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 1:38 PM
Andrea, a lovely poem for the contest, well done. Constance
Horne Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 1:07 PM
wow, I love your rondelet, Andrea. Hope you are coping with the xmas rush and that Joe is keeping his spirits up. Congrats on your wins : )
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