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When Nature Smiles

When nature smiles, she kindly brightens up our days. When nature smiles, most splendidly she drifts for miles - removing skies of gloom or haze. We feel her grace in warming rays when nature smiles. For A Strand (1074) Poetry Contest

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Bryan Norton

Date: 2/12/2022 7:04:00 AM

Conveys well the feelings of nature. Indeed, nature does brighten up our days. Thanks Andrea. Congratulations on your great win. Your friend, shoeshine boy.

Modupe Sefunmi

Date: 2/6/2013 3:04:00 AM

This poem brings a warm smile to my face. Lovely write!

Debbie Duncan

Date: 1/16/2013 8:42:00 PM

Love it,,,, and I see you won ;} awesome,, going in my fav's ;} you have a blessed day Andrea.

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 12/27/2012 11:03:00 PM

Beautiful poem. I see from the comments that it is a winner. Congratulations. It reads like a winner as well.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/19/2012 10:16:00 PM

Andrea,, congratulations with your awesome win in Debbie's "Rondelets OR Simply 7 lines" contest... always~ pd

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/15/2012 10:09:00 AM

Congrats on your great win..Way to go..Sara

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/15/2012 5:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your Hm Andy sweetie xx

Sean Goodwin

Date: 12/14/2012 11:36:00 PM

I like this, very nicely written. -- Sean

Daver Austin

Date: 12/14/2012 8:46:00 AM

Nature is smiling on Saginaw today - bright sunshine. Hope things are this way up where you stay. Love, daver

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/13/2012 11:45:00 PM

A thought to think on here Andrea ( A really natural piece from you ) Pleased to read today.."

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/13/2012 7:35:00 PM

Wonderful poem. soup mail

Jack Horne

Date: 12/12/2012 3:06:00 PM

a sure winner here, my friend - love it

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 12/12/2012 12:35:00 PM

This is good; it will do well for you I am sure. You have a great day and enjoy those smiles :)

Len Gasun

Date: 12/12/2012 10:38:00 AM

I extremely love both the feelings and images in your 7 lines verse/poem my dear friend, Andrea! It's indeed superbly wonderful when nature smiles. I hope nature will smile in our country now ;(. Kudos! A winning piece for sure! Wish you all the best always! love and big hugs, Leonora

Joseph May

Date: 12/11/2012 5:15:00 PM

very good write Andrea...best wishes...love

David Williams

Date: 12/11/2012 4:03:00 PM

Andrea love this one, great fun form, I have just posted one but don't think I will enter it for the contest...David

Heather Ober

Date: 12/11/2012 12:07:00 PM

I don't think you're capable of writing anything that isn't awesome! Debbie will love this. I wish nature would smile in Canada today :)

Robert Pettit

Date: 12/11/2012 10:21:00 AM

Nature must have frowned on us for the past couple of days. We have had a lot of rain here in New Jersey. Your poem says a lot in just seven lines.

Erich Goller

Date: 12/11/2012 8:11:00 AM

Beautiful naturem beautiful expressed poem.Thanks for sharing it.God bless you, Hugs!Erich

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 12/11/2012 5:36:00 AM

this one just brightened and warmed my day, andrea! it's frosty and freezing where I am (literally not metaphorically haha) did you try to send me soupmail because I haven't received it, don't say all the problems with soupmail are starting up again!!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/10/2012 11:37:00 PM

Beautiful write of nature. When nature smiles, peace flows in this world. Enjoyed Tfs.

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 12/10/2012 8:37:00 PM

What a graceful write, Andrea! I loved how you went about this contest. You know me, I'm a buzzing bee who likes to prod writers .... I want MORE! I know, I know, this is enough for the contest, but I see this as a series... when nature scowls, when nature weeps... come on, girl.... try 1 or 2 more? Shoo me, lol, go ahead. I know you're running ragged and have no time and I add to your list of to do's. What kinda friend am I? Ha! A poet friend who sees a few more verses in ya! TICKLE TICKLE :)

Robert Johnson

Date: 12/10/2012 1:51:00 PM

The sun is out, the temperature's down. Natures wearing both a smile and a frown. Winters here all dressed in white. Let's face it, without snow, it just aint right. :) Good luck. Such an uplifting poem Andrea.

Constance La France

Date: 12/10/2012 1:38:00 PM

Andrea, a lovely poem for the contest, well done. Constance

Jack Horne

Date: 12/10/2012 1:07:00 PM

wow, I love your rondelet, Andrea. Hope you are coping with the xmas rush and that Joe is keeping his spirits up. Congrats on your wins : )