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When My Mind Is Lost

When my mind is lost I'll ask her then To take my hand And slowly bend To the sounds we make When we're alone To dance with me On floors of stone From saddened gaze I'll brush her hair And braid the mess I find there When my mind is lost I'll tell her then To take my love And slowly end The time we have To be alone To let me go On my way back home Her saddened gaze Her unbrushed hair The braided mess That finds us there When my mind is lost

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Date: 1/22/2018 11:04:00 PM
I adore this poem Jeff
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Jeff Davies
Date: 1/23/2018 4:11:00 AM
Hello Ingrid Thank you for reading my poem and for the very nice comment
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Ingrid Showalter Swift
Date: 1/22/2018 11:04:00 PM
Love is a messy twine...braid
Date: 12/27/2017 6:28:00 AM
We all lost our mind sometimes.. well expressed Jeff..
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Date: 12/27/2017 7:31:00 PM
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting on the poem

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