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When Mars Sang

Is their life on Mars
Carlotto's image, the Sphinx
Was their life on Mars

Creativity
Our intentions bring again
To Mars, loss or gain

But then we must ask
Simply, what can mankind bring
Mars no longer sings



For Contest 'Subject Mars' written July 7th, 2015.

Copyright © James Fraser | Year Posted 2015

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 7/27/2015 1:13:00 AM Congrats on ur wonderful winning write James! Brilliant work! Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 7/28/2015 3:20:00 PM Thank you Dr. Upma, it's been a lucky streak for me, smiles, James :) :)

Viv Wigley Date: 7/26/2015 11:45:00 PM Well done James,a thoughtful write. Regards, Viv Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 7/28/2015 3:10:00 PM Thank you Viv, much appreciated, James :) :)

Skat A Date: 7/26/2015 4:51:00 PM James Congratulations on your MARS win :) **SKAT** Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 7/28/2015 3:09:00 PM Thank you SKAT, hugs//James :) :)

Jan Allison Date: 7/26/2015 12:14:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats James:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 7/28/2015 3:04:00 PM Thank you Jan, I'm smiling for the wonderful placements and comments received these past few weeks, hugs//always//James xxx

Sara Kendrick Date: 7/21/2015 3:50:00 PM Well, I don't know for I have not been beyond the earth but it doesn't seem that any other planet has the same things going for it that earth has but who knows..Reads like a winner if for a contest..Thanks for dropping by..Sara Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 7/26/2015 10:42:00 AM Indeed, we can only assume there's other life out there. Blessed Sunday to you and yours Sara, James :) :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/7/2015 9:50:00 AM James, nice set of haiku but I prefer best the third one.. Studies are done to see the if life is probable there!~Olive Eloisa =) Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 7/9/2015 2:11:00 PM Love to read up on those studies little one, lead me to the pages one day. Hugs aplenty always, James :) :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/6/2015 3:34:00 PM wouldn't it be cool though, if there WERE life on Mars? there could be!! I like the last one best. INdeed, what can mankind bring? Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 7/9/2015 2:06:00 PM Thank you Andrea, one never knows what's out there, but there's certainly got to be something. It's too vast to be empty of life, and I for one would love to know, James :) :)

Jan Allison Date: 7/6/2015 2:23:00 PM To infinity and beyond - is there life on Mars - who knows but it would be great to know we weren't the only ones in the universe - great take on the theme James - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/6/2015 2:29:00 PM Have even started writing one for Olive's contest my muse is returning:-) hugs jan xx James Fraser Date: 7/6/2015 2:28:00 PM Many thanks Jan, glad to see you back in the body of the Soup, hugs//James xx