When Love Was Innocent

Sing for me the sweetest song of love when life was still so young. Those tender times and days devoid of cares and wants troubling the old, when smiles and laughter ruled the day, when worries passed and did not stay. Strum so softly your guitar just like the nights along the shore when music meant the world to us and dreams were spun with so much fun. With nary a thought to hindrances, and silence in between did not mean sadness. Sketch the image once again of all our hopes and aspirations. Paintbrush, our imaginations that fueled all our conversations. Let the canvas capture the moment when each one’s triumph was heaven sent. With words of wonder I will write of every look and all the sighs, of every throbbing thud within our hearts that sometimes drown the din. Still, we aimed our sight so high a desire defined by what’s ideal... When life was young, and love was innocent.
16 May 2015 Kim Patrice Nunez When Love Was Innocent Contest
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A. Sharma Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 1:48 AM
Awesome write Kim! Congrats on big win!
Deschler Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 12:33 AM
Tender expressions about love and what love means to us as we age... Beautifully written, Kim. Congrats on a great win!
Nunez Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 12:35 AM
Thank you, Kelly! hugs!
Haight Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 10:04 AM
Hi Kim, stopping back again to congratulate on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
Nunez Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 12:35 AM
Thank you, Sandra! hugs!
A  Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 10:47 PM
Kim, it's nice to see this one with a new placement. Congrats!!!!! LOVE **SKAT**
Haight Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 10:07 AM
Kim, this is so beautiful and flows like music. "...when smiles and laughter ruled the day when worries passed and did not stay.." Yes, such emotional reflections for sure we can all share. Congratulations on receiving the nice placement your poem deserves! Hugs, Sandra
Richards Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 7:39 PM
What a beauty this is.....I almost feel it should be set to music !! Congratulations dear Kim!
Tor Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 4:43 PM
Kim nice win!
Guzzi Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 9:16 AM
Reads like a winner I enjoyed the use of internal rhyme! Light & Love
M.N.I.W Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 4:09 PM
Beautiful words to a fragile nostalgic concept. A time that all who grow old reminisce upon.
Fraser Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 2:53 PM
Beautiful poetry Kim, what an absolute joy to read this Friday evening, hugs, James :)
Zaire Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 9:49 AM
Your writings I deeply commend Kim. I'm deeply moved by this.
Makama Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 10:07 AM
Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7!
Schumacker Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 9:47 AM
Hi Kim, This is a very rhythmic streaming piece that flows like of soft river of words. Very nice, smooth and a clear 7 rating with my pleasure. Have a wonderful day. Earl
Pinet Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 11:32 AM
Your words delicate, yet so strong and layered with emotion. Emile. #7
Manassian Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 6:54 AM
This is very beautiful, Kim. It does have a lovely cadence to it. :) Young love has it's own special flavor as you have depicted so aptly. Lovely. Hugs
Bear Avatar
May 23, 2015 at 9:34 AM
Oh sweet innocence. Congratulations on the win. You are extraordinary Blessings Edith
Breidenthal Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 11:17 PM
"With nary a thought to hindrances, silence in between did not mean sadness."...love it Kim... so captivating. I also really like the lines, "Paintbrush, our imaginations that fueled all our conversations."...wow... your word choice is very unique. Congrats on your win by the way! Always, Laura
Lamoureux Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 7:33 AM
Congratulations on your win Kim.
Johnson Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 7:31 PM
A beautiful poem to reminisce with. Enjoyed very much.
Onclaud Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 12:48 PM
well, this is simply charming and dreamy, kim... sweet congrats!super galing!
Roper Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 8:50 PM
beautiful write a 7, congratulations on your win hugs
Maverick Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 5:34 PM
Really good, and a resultant H M Kim..'
A  Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 9:34 AM
KIM:) Congratulations on the Honorable Mention. That was nice of Justin------ Forever *SKAT*
Callus Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 3:47 PM
Those were the days, Kim!! So nice of you to take me back in time when "life was young, and love was innocent". A lovely musical poem that merits a top 7 rating. Hugs // paul
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May 18, 2015 at 3:07 PM
This is such a great nostalgic piece, Kim! "when music meant the world to us and dreams were spun with so much fun" As a teenager this is life! Hope this does well! ~Jan
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