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When Life Is Fine

When I met you first you seemed snobbish, used a mask to guard all secrets, felt we can’t be on same page, our paths forked, we drifted. Memory flashed back your self-esteem, misconstrued. Mistake owned. My sane mind came on course, became prudent. Erring on impulse, failed to glean latent truth, bearing can be deceptive. Learned to construe reality, life is fine if it’s less judgemental.
December 11, 2020 Contest : Double Nonet Sponsor : William Kekaula

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Date: 12/23/2020 10:12:00 AM
Interesting winning work. Congrats on this winner. Sara
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Date: 12/21/2020 6:51:00 PM
Winsome point. Thank you for sharing a wondrous part of yourself, Subimal, my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
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