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When Jane Began Growing

Jane was tiny, but then began growing till her bosom most amply was showing. Now she’s griping no more as she goes out her door on fun dates with her cups overflowing! Feb. 21, 2022 For Tania Kitchin's A New Bawdy Or Humorous Limerick Poetry Contest 42 syllables total as checked by Howmanysyllables.com: Lines 1,2 and 3: 10 syllables each Lines 4 and 5: 6 syllables each

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Date: 3/7/2022 4:22:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your first place win, this made me belly laugh!
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Date: 3/7/2022 9:57:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea, it gave me a good feel! It was your breast win! Perfection!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/7/2022 11:44:00 AM
love your word play
Date: 3/7/2022 5:42:00 AM
very good! Congrats Andrea! a cup full of humour!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/7/2022 11:44:00 AM
great word play in your comment
Date: 3/6/2022 4:09:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea....nicely done!
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Date: 3/6/2022 7:11:00 AM
Congrats overfloweth, Andrea.
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Date: 3/6/2022 6:21:00 AM
Congratulations this is so funny!
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Date: 3/6/2022 5:38:00 AM
LOL…so funny! Congratulations on first place!
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Date: 3/6/2022 5:36:00 AM
Interesting, indeed. Beautifully written in your own wonderful Andrean creativity and style. Congratulation!
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Date: 3/3/2022 3:56:00 PM
Haha, that's Bawdy; well done.
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Date: 2/26/2022 11:41:00 AM
I am in no doubt that well-endowed Jane had many admirers :) As usual, your smooth flow and perfect meter are worthy of mention. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 2/24/2022 9:41:00 AM
Well endowed she is, maybe a back pain to go with it as my sister with large cups always complained. Very well done, Andrea. Thank you for reading all my verses. Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/24/2022 7:44:00 AM
This is perfect Andrea. I am still smiling with imagery of her in my head. Good morning. I really should go back to sleep or I will be dragging through the day. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/24/2022 5:58:00 AM
Bawdy and fun!
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Date: 2/23/2022 3:50:00 AM
Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. For some that would be a good thing and for others it would be the worst thing. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 2/22/2022 10:31:00 PM
So cute, and for many a young girl, very true. Good luck in the contest, Andrea. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill
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Date: 2/22/2022 11:02:00 AM
She can always trust Rico to lend an hand . . . . Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Date: 2/22/2022 9:38:00 AM
Where was Jane, when I was young and out exploring?:) Very cute! Have a great day my friend!
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Date: 2/21/2022 3:57:00 PM
I thought of Dolly, Parton lol...
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Date: 2/21/2022 1:15:00 PM
Lol, sounds like she's a girl with backache. Tom
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/21/2022 8:46:00 PM
it could have been me, Tom, and I never had backaches!! hahaha
Date: 2/21/2022 11:27:00 AM
Lol! Andrea, This is a good one for the contest theme. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day-Alexis
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