When Jane Began Growing

Jane was tiny, but then began growing
till her bosom most amply was showing.
Now she’s griping no more
as she goes out her door
on fun dates with her cups overflowing!

Feb. 21, 2022
For Tania Kitchin's A New Bawdy Or Humorous Limerick Poetry Contest
42 syllables total as checked by Howmanysyllables.com:
Lines 1,2 and 3: 10 syllables each
Lines 4 and 5: 6 syllables each
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Kitchin Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 4:22 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your first place win, this made me belly laugh!
Anaya Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 9:57 AM
Congratulations Andrea, it gave me a good feel! It was your breast win! Perfection!
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 11:44 AM
love your word play
Radhakrishna Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 5:42 AM
very good! Congrats Andrea! a cup full of humour!
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 11:44 AM
great word play in your comment
Chunn Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 4:09 PM
Congratulations Andrea....nicely done!
Logan Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 7:11 AM
Congrats overfloweth, Andrea.
Miller Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 6:21 AM
Congratulations this is so funny!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 5:38 AM
LOL…so funny! Congratulations on first place!
Alex Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 5:36 AM
Interesting, indeed. Beautifully written in your own wonderful Andrean creativity and style. Congratulation!
Kiser Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 3:56 PM
Haha, that's Bawdy; well done.
Callus Avatar
February 26, 2022 at 11:41 AM
I am in no doubt that well-endowed Jane had many admirers :) As usual, your smooth flow and perfect meter are worthy of mention. ~ Regards // paul
Roper Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 9:41 AM
Well endowed she is, maybe a back pain to go with it as my sister with large cups always complained. Very well done, Andrea. Thank you for reading all my verses. Hugs Eve
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 7:44 AM
This is perfect Andrea. I am still smiling with imagery of her in my head. Good morning. I really should go back to sleep or I will be dragging through the day. Blessings xxoo
Krutsinger Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 5:58 AM
Bawdy and fun!
Kendrick Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 3:50 AM
Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. For some that would be a good thing and for others it would be the worst thing. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
Baker Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 10:31 PM
So cute, and for many a young girl, very true. Good luck in the contest, Andrea. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill
Leffanta Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 11:02 AM
She can always trust Rico to lend an hand . . . . Enjoyed! Aloha!
DiMino Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 9:38 AM
Where was Jane, when I was young and out exploring?:) Very cute! Have a great day my friend!
Tor Avatar
February 21, 2022 at 3:57 PM
I thought of Dolly, Parton lol...
Cunningham Avatar
February 21, 2022 at 1:15 PM
Lol, sounds like she's a girl with backache. Tom
Dietrich Avatar
February 21, 2022 at 8:46 PM
it could have been me, Tom, and I never had backaches!! hahaha
Y. Avatar
February 21, 2022 at 11:27 AM
Lol! Andrea, This is a good one for the contest theme. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day-Alexis
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