Word play with rain, hope you enjoy it I did.
When it rains, human tears drench the heart and soul When it rains, heavens tears washes away pain and sorrow but, When it reins, there is control, mind rules over heart and soul When it reins, direction and purpose will always play their role and, When it reigns, choice vanishes, the heart submits to the mind When it reigns, contentment rules, peace and joy you will find Derek John Hamilton November 23,2015
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