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When I'M With You

I am handcuffed to your existence- please throw away the key... I embrace my decree and plea as I refuse without resistance- for you are the only one for me. feed me your intellect, I crave the knowledge your mind carries without fear- I adore the way we connect as I save all the words you professed as you held me near. etch me at eventide so that my silhouette may be a reflection of the moonlight splendor- catch me when I fall so that I never forget the direction of our love so tender. for you are my intimate connection- my true familiarity with affection. when I'm with you...I'm home. August 7, 2018

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Date: 8/9/2018 9:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem, Luloo - blessings and best wishes for more! :-) <3
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Date: 8/8/2018 9:21:00 AM
Beautiful, Laura. Congrats on your podium finish.
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/9/2018 1:23:00 PM
thank you sweet Line! :)-luloo
Date: 8/8/2018 7:21:00 AM
This is amazing poetry, Luloo:) you rock:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/9/2018 1:23:00 PM
awww thank you sweet Jo, miss you :)-luloo
Date: 8/8/2018 2:26:00 AM
Sounds like a wonderful relationship and such clever wording! Congratulations, Laura.
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/9/2018 1:22:00 PM
thank you Wendy, I love my hubby :)-luloo
Date: 8/8/2018 1:28:00 AM
This hit the nail with on love. Loved it!
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/9/2018 1:22:00 PM
many thanks :)-luloo
Date: 8/7/2018 1:14:00 PM
The last line sums up love so perfectly, Laura.
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/9/2018 1:22:00 PM
thank you caring Caren :)-luloo

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