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When I Slumber Where Rushing Waters Play

When I Slumber Where Rushing Waters Play As my worries invade my tortured mind I wake to find another place to be Misery and despair both so unkind sending me racing to be gone and free I run to the nearest water flowing soothing sounds blast into inner spirit Even better if soft breeze a blowing comfort abounds whenever I hear it Soft waves of time ebb and begin to stop gurgling sounds grab onto wings of my soul All my loves racing upward to the top like waters rushing out of gaping hole Man's spirit latches on to such great gifts Racing waters sends treasure that uplifts Robert J. Lindley, 04-06-2015 EDIT( This poem has been chosen for future publication at Whispers.com) Poem Syllable Counter Results Syllables Per Line: 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 Total # Syllables: 140 Total # Lines: 17 (Including empty lines) Words with (syllables) counted programmatically: N/A Total # Words: 101 ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Note: Wrote this today from memory of a night drive to my favorite spot by the river long ago. That night I had a vexing problem that was eating my soul and needed a remedy. I went to that favorite spot to think. And later that night the solution came to me as if by magic. Something about that spot is magical. Its not just my imagination...

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Date: 4/7/2015 7:04:00 AM
I think when we are really troubled that God gives us the answer in our sleep..The running water does help for there are ions that are smoothing that come from the stream..I enjoyed reading your well written work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 4/6/2015 9:14:00 PM
Thank you for taking me on this journey into the depths of your heart as inspired by the rushing water's grace~ Beautifully Penned~
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Date: 4/6/2015 7:21:00 PM
G'day Robert... by structuring your sonnet it made the reading easy and the topic takes me to a spiritual place. Thank you Robert - Lindsay
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Date: 4/6/2015 6:33:00 PM
I can relate to this Robert - amazing how a change of scene especially to a beautiful place can soothe the soul. i often go down to the beach to write - the sound of the waves is so soothing - just need the weather to get a bit warmer here! Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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