When I Slumber Where Rushing Waters Play
When I Slumber Where Rushing Waters Play
As my worries invade my tortured mind
I wake to find another place to be
Misery and despair both so unkind
sending me racing to be gone and free
I run to the nearest water flowing
soothing sounds blast into inner spirit
Even better if soft breeze a blowing
comfort abounds whenever I hear it
Soft waves of time ebb and begin to stop
gurgling sounds grab onto wings of my soul
All my loves racing upward to the top
like waters rushing out of gaping hole
Man's spirit latches on to such great gifts
Racing waters sends treasure that uplifts
Robert J. Lindley, 04-06-2015
EDIT( This poem has been chosen for future publication at Whispers.com)
Poem Syllable Counter Results
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Total # Words: 101
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Note: Wrote this today from memory of a night drive to my favorite spot by the river long ago. That night I had a vexing problem that was eating my soul and needed a remedy.
I went to that favorite spot to think. And later that night the solution came to me as if by magic. Something about that spot is magical. Its not just my imagination...
Copyright © Robert Lindley | Year Posted 2015
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