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When I Need You the Most

Why I can only come to you when I feel fine? when all goes well when all's aligned? when I don't need to talk when I don't need to find pieces of that broken soul I carry inside? Why I can't come to you when all feels wrong? when I feel lonely when I'm not strong? when I'm falling apart when I loose control when I feel sad wen I fall? Why you leave me alone when I need you the most? Jessica

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Date: 10/22/2023 1:36:00 AM
Heartbreaking and sad poem. Expressed so well.
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Jessica Carrasco
Date: 10/22/2023 8:59:00 AM
yes...we know...poems can be the rain and the sun of the soul...sending you love
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Silent One
Date: 10/22/2023 3:35:00 AM
Indeed.. but we know the storm wont last forever..
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Jessica Carrasco
Date: 10/22/2023 1:53:00 AM
thanks for your comments and kind words
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Jessica Carrasco
Date: 10/22/2023 1:52:00 AM
isn't it interesting how we function in this world? we just want to see the sun and despise the rain...

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