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When I Let One Loose In the Elevator

When I Let One Loose In the Elevator Crammed packed, spaces none spare Letting rip was just too much to bear Noses spent, seeking the perpetrator When I Let One Loose in the Elevator I hid my guilt; it was me, who dealt it I just stood there eyes up, teeth grit Suffocating fumes; letting out a gasp Door open; mad dash to get out fast Entry for “When I let one loose in the elevator contest” Sponsor: Charles Messina Date: 6th August 2021

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Jan Allison

Date: 8/6/2021 12:39:00 PM

ha ha ha priceless humour, i have a farty poem to post tonight lol:-) hugs jan xx

Indiana Shaw
Date: 8/6/2021 6:04:00 PM

I will hold my nose on reading that one then, Jan . . . : )

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/6/2021 8:41:00 AM

Lol, this is a hoot Indiana, everyones worst nightmare, always deny all knowledge and keep a straight face Good luck in the contest. Enjoy your weekend. Tom

Indiana Shaw
Date: 8/6/2021 11:33:00 AM

I think Charles has us all over a barrel here, as it is an I let loose, as we have all overtly admitted to our guilt here as to the smelly deed, ha, ha, ha, and a good weekend to you, Sir ; )