Anne E Sangster - K Poet Rhyme

When I Let One Loose In the Elevator

When I let one loose in the elevator
I hoped the smell would pass 
But it stopped on six then my boss stepped in 
And my bowels expelled more gas

He sniffed the air not once but twice 
And asked if I smelled stew? 
I answered back with a sheepish grin
I think it's butt Fondue

August 04 2021

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Lon Wartman October 6, 2021 at 5:45 AM I am convinced that we poets need to write more joyful and happy poetry. Thanks so much for sharing your many poems with us. FYI I just published a book called 365 Joyful Poems. I love your work. Anne E Sangster - K October 7, 2021 at 3:08 PM Thank you Lon and you are so right. We definitely need more joyful and happy poems to make us smile. Especially during these hard times. Congratulations on publishing your poems. Cheers Anne :-)

Vance Monet October 3, 2021 at 3:19 PM Clever Anne E Sangster - K October 7, 2021 at 3:10 PM Thank you Vance. I hope it brought a smile to your face. Cheers Anne :-)

Ann Peck August 11, 2021 at 2:00 PM HaHa! So funny, Anne! Congratulations on your win! Anne E Sangster - K August 11, 2021 at 3:55 PM Thank you Ann! We all need a good laugh these days. Cheers Anne :-)

Paula Goldsmith August 11, 2021 at 10:31 AM Congratulations on your win. What a creative story/write.  Way tooooo funny. Thanks for the laugh. From now on it will be "Fondue." Have a blessed day with your win............... Anne E Sangster - K August 11, 2021 at 11:13 AM Hi Paula, Nice to meet you. Thank you :-) I'm glad you stopped by and enjoyed my poem. It was a fun contest! Cheers Anne :-)

Tom Cunningham August 10, 2021 at 3:10 PM This is a toot sorry I mean a hoot lol Congrats on your win Anne. Tom Anne E Sangster - K August 10, 2021 at 5:05 PM Hi Tom, Nice to meet you. Thank you and congratulations on your win too. Cheers Anne :-)

Delice Arleen Skelly August 9, 2021 at 10:16 PM Having an early morning smile reading about smells in the elevator. Well done and congratulations...Delice Anne E Sangster - K August 10, 2021 at 5:01 PM Hi Delice, Thank you and congratulations on your win too. Cheers Anne :-)

Terry Flood August 9, 2021 at 3:27 PM I note with interest that you windy women outnumber us ‘well plugged’ men by two to one. I’m going to start a scientific survey into ‘Duvet flutter’. Congrats on your worthy win, Anne. Terry Anne E Sangster - K August 9, 2021 at 4:47 PM Windy women... Why Sir, what ever do you mean? In my house if the wind rolls through It's always the cat, the dog or husband. ;-D Thank you Terry and congratulations on your win too. Cheers Anne :-)

Jan Allison August 9, 2021 at 2:57 PM Dropping back with many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Anne E Sangster - K August 9, 2021 at 3:19 PM Hi Jan, Thank you again and congratulations to you too. Hugs Anne :-)

Brian Sambourne August 9, 2021 at 8:55 AM Wonderfully clever rhymes + an original narrative. Congratulations on such a creative entry. Best wishes, Brian Anne E Sangster - K August 9, 2021 at 10:13 AM Hi Brian, Nice to meet you, Thank you for your kind feedback. Cheers Anne :-)

Beryl Edmonds August 9, 2021 at 8:30 AM What a laugh out loud that was Anne, congratulations on your top spot win. . Belle Anne E Sangster - K August 9, 2021 at 8:43 AM Hi Belle, Thank you and congratulations on your win too! It was a gas entering this competition. Cheers Anne :-)

Kim Rodrigues August 9, 2021 at 7:32 AM LOL! Congrats! Anne E Sangster - K August 9, 2021 at 8:45 AM Thank you Kim and congratulations on your win too! A fun write. Cheers Anne :-)

Indiana Shaw August 9, 2021 at 7:29 AM Ha, ha, ha, loved it, not the smell, the poem . . . ; ) Anne E Sangster - K August 9, 2021 at 7:48 AM Hi Indiana, Lol... Glad to hear you loved it! Cheers Anne :-)

Jo Chamberlain August 9, 2021 at 6:53 AM Brilliant so very! Congratulations on your winning placement, well deserved. Anne E Sangster - K August 9, 2021 at 7:44 AM Hi Joanna, Nice to meet you. Thank you for your kind feedback and congratulations on your win you too! Cheers Anne :-)

Charles Messina August 9, 2021 at 6:20 AM Anne, this is hilarious! Still laughing... Congratulations on your top win in my contest... Hugs Charlie Anne E Sangster - K August 9, 2021 at 7:38 AM Hi Charlie, Nice to meet you. I'm happy to hear you had a good laugh and felt my poem worthy of your top win. Thank you for the honour. It was a fun competition! A few laughs and giggles on the Soup are exactly what the doctor ordered. Cheers my friend Anne :-)

Gershon Wolf August 5, 2021 at 11:39 AM Ha, ha, ha, ha! Hilarious! Bottle it and sell it. With 'fondue' on the label, what could go wrong?! lol. Thanks for the laughs, Anne! ~ Gershon Anne E Sangster - K August 5, 2021 at 4:06 PM Hi Gershon, Glad you enjoyed it :-D lol at bottle and sell it! Cheers my friend :-)

Jan Allison August 4, 2021 at 10:27 AM lol:-) the second stanza really made me lol:-) hugs jan xx Anne E Sangster - K August 4, 2021 at 10:43 AM Nice to meet you Jan. Thank you for your feedback. I'm glad to hear you got a good laugh at my second stanza. We all need a good laugh these days. Back at you with the hugs :-) Anne xox