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When I close my eyes
And shut out the world momentarily 
I admit it’s strange but I feel apprehensive
It’s a fear of being unable to return
I get a glimpse of that vast open inner world
That’s somehow an open door to infinity
And I’m somewhat afraid to lose my way

I can’t help but think it’s silly
Because I feel surprisingly safe 
As I give in freely every night
When I lay my head to sleep

The difference may be that
I’m not visiting unexpectedly
I have that set nighttime rendez-vous
A longstanding arrangement
With guides and loved ones
All those from the other side
We meet though I have no recollection
But it’s an arrangement honored
Ever since I was merely a babe



AP: 2nd place 2020

Posted on March 17, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/18/2018 12:11:00 PM
Love it line, the peace you get when you close your eyes and get lost in your thoughts ,another world. Tom
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/18/2018 12:30:00 PM
Thank you so much for your visit and comment, Tom. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/17/2018 9:52:00 PM
Although, mine are somewhat irregular, i have visitors that grace my sleep at times. I related to this poem immensely, Line. A most enjoyable read.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/17/2018 10:05:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Daniel. Most appreciated.

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