When I Close My Eyes

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When I close my eyes And shut out the world momentarily I admit it’s strange but I feel apprehensive It’s a fear of being unable to return I get a glimpse of that vast open inner world That’s somehow an open door to infinity And I’m somewhat afraid to lose my way I can’t help but think it’s silly Because I feel surprisingly safe As I give in freely every night When I lay my head to sleep The difference may be that I’m not visiting unexpectedly I have that set nighttime rendez-vous A longstanding arrangement With guides and loved ones All those from the other side We meet though I have no recollection But it’s an arrangement honored Ever since I was merely a babe AP: 2nd place 2020 Posted in March, 2018

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/18/2018 12:11:00 PM

Love it line, the peace you get when you close your eyes and get lost in your thoughts ,another world. Tom

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/18/2018 12:30:00 PM

Thank you so much for your visit and comment, Tom. Much appreciated.

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/17/2018 9:52:00 PM

Although, mine are somewhat irregular, i have visitors that grace my sleep at times. I related to this poem immensely, Line. A most enjoyable read.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/17/2018 10:05:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Daniel. Most appreciated.