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When I Am Dust

When I am no longer here, will sunrays fall and, unobstructed by me, still leave a spot on the ground unlit? Or shed leaves draw up short, detour, though I’m not in their way? Will foamy water spill around my lost footprints in sand? Or raindrops bounce off my hunched-over silhouette? Will fragrant breezes glide around a hollow shaped like a man with his face upturned? Or the sound waves of music that once made me glad to be alive flow around the space where the open arms of my ears used to be? Will my pillow recall the contours of my head, refusing to be fluffed? No, I don’t expect they will. It would be enough if, when I am dust, you put your remembering arms around my absence. One more time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 4/5/2019 1:46:00 PM
Beautiful, goosebump evoking poem Bernard. Magnificent piece. xomo
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Bernard Chan
Date: 4/6/2019 5:19:00 AM
Thank you, Maureen :)
Date: 4/3/2019 11:03:00 PM
Excellent. Great poem. I really enjoyed it. We all want to be remembered.
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Bernard Chan
Date: 4/4/2019 1:55:00 AM
Thanks a lot, David.
Date: 4/3/2019 10:16:00 PM
Your last stanza makes he poem upbeat and happy; in the aftermath of the possibility of great sadness and regret. Well done Bernard!
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Bernard Chan
Date: 4/4/2019 2:05:00 AM
Thank you, Caren! :))

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