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When He Smiles

The sun shines again for he smiles. The indeterminable day no longer flees or hides for its end is sought, as is its beginning for he smiles. Confusion though abiding must wait the laggard servant scolded by the Mistress Aphrodite for he smiles. Want must find a different dwelling for the moment un-housed by sweetest joy for he smiles. The sun shines again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/2/2012 2:37:00 PM
Brought a smile to my old face. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Date: 7/30/2012 8:46:00 PM
what a sweet poem Debbie, congrats on having it featured thisweek
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Date: 3/8/2011 5:00:00 AM
of course! grand observation.... well said.....goodluckenheimer!!!! jamesy
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Date: 3/8/2011 12:22:00 AM
Congratulations on having all 3 of your poems move to the finals! Best of luck! Peace and hugs, John (aka - Daddy)
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Date: 3/7/2011 5:44:00 PM
Good luck. OMG! I'm outnumbered by liberals. Congrats on all three poems making it thru the first round. Vince
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Date: 3/7/2011 12:36:00 PM
Many congrats on your well deserved three first round successes Debbie - luv Janette
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Date: 3/6/2011 6:24:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your first round success in the Poetry Soup contest luv...
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Date: 11/7/2010 2:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Deborah in Audrey's contest. Wishing you the best with your writing and winning in contests. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2010 8:11:00 AM
Congrats Debbie on your HM in the love letters contest with this excellent entry depicting luv.. enjoy this happy Sunday a very special honor all your own.. luv..
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Date: 11/7/2010 8:07:00 AM
When you find happiness in seeing someone smile, youknow you have a special love, Deb. Congrats on your success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/7/2010 7:45:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN..SARA
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Date: 11/6/2010 4:33:00 PM
Hey Deb, I must thank you for supporting my contest. This is elegant and an exquisite, enjoyable read! Love, Audrey
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Date: 11/6/2010 3:45:00 PM
Congratulations Debbie on your success in the contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/6/2010 3:18:00 PM
Congratulations on this win, Debbie
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Date: 2/16/2010 3:33:00 PM
The very best of you......so far,so good!
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Date: 2/4/2010 2:08:00 PM
Excellent writing Deborah, I love a beautiful smile :-) Thank you for sharing such a wonderfully penned read. God Bless, Always, Adell
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Date: 1/31/2010 2:50:00 PM
I love "Want must find a different dwelling" Such a wonderful love poem...Enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 1/28/2010 2:21:00 PM
Beautiful loving free verse Deborah, love is definately in your air. I have taken your wonderful advice and deleted the last two stanza's on my poem " Through the Steamed up Glass " > thank you so much again >> James,xx
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Date: 1/28/2010 4:48:00 AM
Its very sweetly weaved a Great Poem in which you have tried to catch a glimpse of His smile. Wonderful. What a beautiful and lovely poem full of light you have placed. Thanks for a nice reading. Best wishes and love Ravindra
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Date: 1/27/2010 4:33:00 PM
Everytime He Smiles,the Sun will shine again..so beautiful and going to my favz,myy dear friend..Charma
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Date: 1/27/2010 7:34:00 AM
Nicely written fFree Verse, Deborah! The sun shines with every smile! Love...Gert
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Date: 1/27/2010 3:37:00 AM
Beautiful Deborah. Magnificent writing as usual. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/26/2010 11:02:00 PM
Wow, this is true art. The flow of your words is like a soft breeze brushing the canvas of a hopeless romantics heart. This one goes in my favs. Thank you. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 1/26/2010 4:16:00 PM
Quality Poetry from u Debbie.. this is a stunner ... almost Shakespearean... luv luv luv the interior words... depth degree of romance ... your reference to Aphrodite is magnificent... Linda-Marie... thankxx for your comments on my poetry today...
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Date: 1/26/2010 1:18:00 PM
Sounds like the god of sun! Zeus, is it? REally nice, and I like how it almost looks like the way you center the format of your poems to look so enchanting. Andrea
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