Debbie Guzzi Poet Free verse

When He Smiles

The sun shines again 
for he smiles.
The indeterminable day no longer flees or hides
for its end is sought, as is its beginning
for he smiles.
Confusion though abiding
must wait the laggard servant
scolded by the Mistress Aphrodite
for he smiles.
Want must find a different dwelling
for the moment un-housed by sweetest joy
for he smiles.
The sun shines again.

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Daver Austin August 2, 2012 at 2:37 PM Brought a smile to my old face. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Francine Roberts July 30, 2012 at 8:46 PM what a sweet poem Debbie, congrats on having it featured thisweek

James Marshall Goff March 8, 2011 at 5:00 AM of course! grand observation.... well said.....goodluckenheimer!!!! jamesy

John Heck March 8, 2011 at 12:22 AM Congratulations on having all 3 of your poems move to the finals! Best of luck! Peace and hugs, John (aka - Daddy)

Vince Suzadail Jr. March 7, 2011 at 5:44 PM Good luck. OMG! I'm outnumbered by liberals. Congrats on all three poems making it thru the first round. Vince

Janette Fisher March 7, 2011 at 12:36 PM Many congrats on your well deserved three first round successes Debbie - luv Janette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 6, 2011 at 6:24 PM Congrats Debbie on your first round success in the Poetry Soup contest luv...

Carol Sunshine Brown November 7, 2010 at 2:24 PM Congratulations on your win Deborah in Audrey's contest. Wishing you the best with your writing and winning in contests. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 7, 2010 at 8:11 AM Congrats Debbie on your HM in the love letters contest with this excellent entry depicting luv.. enjoy this happy Sunday a very special honor all your own.. luv..

Carolyn Devonshire November 7, 2010 at 8:07 AM When you find happiness in seeing someone smile, youknow you have a special love, Deb. Congrats on your success in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick November 7, 2010 at 7:45 AM CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN..SARA

Audrey Haick November 6, 2010 at 4:33 PM Hey Deb, I must thank you for supporting my contest. This is elegant and an exquisite, enjoyable read! Love, Audrey

John Freeman November 6, 2010 at 3:45 PM Congratulations Debbie on your success in the contest. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta November 6, 2010 at 3:18 PM Congratulations on this win, Debbie

K K Iloduba Jnr February 16, 2010 at 3:33 PM The very best of you......so far,so good!

Adell Foster February 4, 2010 at 2:08 PM Excellent writing Deborah, I love a beautiful smile :-) Thank you for sharing such a wonderfully penned read. God Bless, Always, Adell

Marty Owens January 31, 2010 at 2:50 PM I love "Want must find a different dwelling" Such a wonderful love poem...Enjoyed...Marty

James Fraser January 28, 2010 at 2:21 PM Beautiful loving free verse Deborah, love is definately in your air. I have taken your wonderful advice and deleted the last two stanza's on my poem " Through the Steamed up Glass " > thank you so much again >> James,xx

Ravindra K Kapoor January 28, 2010 at 4:48 AM Its very sweetly weaved a Great Poem in which you have tried to catch a glimpse of His smile. Wonderful. What a beautiful and lovely poem full of light you have placed. Thanks for a nice reading. Best wishes and love Ravindra

Charmaine Chircop January 27, 2010 at 4:33 PM Everytime He Smiles,the Sun will shine again..so beautiful and going to my favz,myy dear friend..Charma

Gert W. Knop January 27, 2010 at 7:34 AM Nicely written fFree Verse, Deborah! The sun shines with every smile! Love...Gert

Carol Sunshine Brown January 27, 2010 at 3:37 AM Beautiful Deborah. Magnificent writing as usual. Love, Carol

Lena Townsend January 26, 2010 at 11:02 PM Wow, this is true art. The flow of your words is like a soft breeze brushing the canvas of a hopeless romantics heart. This one goes in my favs. Thank you. Smiles from Lolita

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 26, 2010 at 4:16 PM Quality Poetry from u Debbie.. this is a stunner ... almost Shakespearean... luv luv luv the interior words... depth degree of romance ... your reference to Aphrodite is magnificent... Linda-Marie... thankxx for your comments on my poetry today...

Andrea Dietrich January 26, 2010 at 1:18 PM Sounds like the god of sun! Zeus, is it? REally nice, and I like how it almost looks like the way you center the format of your poems to look so enchanting. Andrea

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