When Grandma's Work Was All Done

"What must I do now?" Grandma said while rocking in her chair
or lying in her comfy bed. She had the best of care.

"What must I do now"?" she would ask of those who brought each meal,
of all who came to do a task or say, "How do you feel?"

"Oh, not a thing," the answer came. "Just leave it all to us.
Each day for you is now the same--no worries, muss, or fuss."

"What must I do?" she queried still. "The kids will be home soon.
Their many needs I must fulfill, and now it's way past noon."

Her children said, "Don't worry, Dear. We're HERE, and we're all grown.
The work's all done. What's that--a tear? Don't cry. You're not alone."

        *********************************
What will we do without her here? We'll reminisce and smile.
"Farewell" on Earth is not the end. We'll see her in a while.


This poem is about my maternal Grandmother. 


Date: October 10, 2020
Contest Title: From the Heart      Placed 3rd (of ten)
Sponsor: Regina McIntosh

July 27, 2021
entered in "A Brian Strand Couplet Contest"



150 words 
June 29, 2022
entered in the Rhyming Poetry Contest--topic "Farewell"
Sponsor: Lisa YY
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Merryman Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 9:42 AM
Beautiful and sad at the same time. Very well written, Janice! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
Alex Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 4:21 AM
A beautifully created couplet. Congratulations on your win!
Strand Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 12:04 PM
Janice , a prize winner+ award in contest 1016
Gaul Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 5:27 PM
What a strong last line. Loved the way you wove the dialogue through the story in rhyme. Masterfully done. She really meant a lot to all. And this poem resounds with all. These feelings are familiar too. Congratulations on your high placement. Well deserved.
Canerdy Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 6:16 PM
Thanks a million, Greg! Janice
Fowler Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 3:35 PM
Very soulfully moving poem Janice. Congratulations on your win! Linda
Canerdy Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 6:17 PM
Thanks so much, Linda. Janice
Kendrick Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 1:42 PM
Ahh!! I know you and all in your family love her. Very creative, expressive and emotive about the one you love. Congrats on your winning work. Sara
Canerdy Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 1:54 PM
Thanks so much, Sara. Janice
Kauffman Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 1:04 PM
Janice, your loving words about your grandmother took me into memories of my maternal grandmother. Like Gina, I am so glad you entered this loving tribute. Congratulations on your win - well deserved!
Canerdy Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 1:54 PM
Thanks so much, Sam. Janice
Mcintosh Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 11:51 AM
A blessing to read and I'm so glad you entered this. It's quite beautiful and impressive in your muse... God bless you and Congrats too
Canerdy Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 12:14 PM
Regina, thank you so much for sponsoring the contest and for my placement. I am thrilled! Janice
Wolf Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 5:16 PM
A tearjerker for me. "What must I do now?" says it all. ~ To grandmothers everywhere! :) gw
Canerdy Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 5:21 PM
Thanks so much, Gershon! Janice
Leffanta Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 12:50 PM
Lovely tribute. My grandmother had ten children plus her children's children to raise during WWII and never raised her voice! Aloha! Rico
Canerdy Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 2:29 PM
WOW! Your grandma sounds like a great lady. Thanks so much, Rico. Janice
Cunningham Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 7:42 AM
Beautiful verse from the heart Janice, they could never do enough for you, even when you were all grown up and you never forget them. Tom
Canerdy Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 10:52 AM
Thanks so much, Tom. Grandma had been a really busy woman in her younger years. She couldn't grasp the fact, when her mind stated failing, that there was no work for her to do! Janice
One Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 6:58 AM
A lovely poem...
Canerdy Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 10:53 AM
Thanks so much, S.O. Janice
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