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When Grandma's Work Was All Done

"What must I do now?" Grandma said while rocking in her chair or lying in her comfy bed. She had the best of care. "What must I do now"?" she would ask of those who brought each meal, of all who came to do a task or say, "How do you feel?" "Oh, not a thing," the answer came. "Just leave it all to us. Each day for you is now the same--no worries, muss, or fuss." "What must I do?" she queried still. "The kids will be home soon. Their many needs I must fulfill, and now it's way past noon." Her children said, "Don't worry, Dear. We're HERE, and we're all grown. The work's all done. What's that--a tear? Don't cry. You're not alone." ********************************* What will we do without her here? We'll reminisce and smile. "Farewell" on Earth is not the end. We'll see her in a while. This poem is about my maternal Grandmother. Date: October 10, 2020 Contest Title: From the Heart Placed 3rd (of ten) Sponsor: Regina McIntosh July 27, 2021 entered in "A Brian Strand Couplet Contest" 150 words June 29, 2022 entered in the Rhyming Poetry Contest--topic "Farewell" Sponsor: Lisa YY

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Date: 7/30/2021 9:42:00 AM
Beautiful and sad at the same time. Very well written, Janice! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/29/2021 4:21:00 AM
A beautifully created couplet. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/28/2021 12:04:00 PM
Janice , a prize winner+ award in contest 1016
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Date: 10/28/2020 5:27:00 PM
What a strong last line. Loved the way you wove the dialogue through the story in rhyme. Masterfully done. She really meant a lot to all. And this poem resounds with all. These feelings are familiar too. Congratulations on your high placement. Well deserved.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/28/2020 6:16:00 PM
Thanks a million, Greg! Janice
Date: 10/28/2020 3:35:00 PM
Very soulfully moving poem Janice. Congratulations on your win! Linda
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/28/2020 6:17:00 PM
Thanks so much, Linda. Janice
Date: 10/28/2020 1:42:00 PM
Ahh!! I know you and all in your family love her. Very creative, expressive and emotive about the one you love. Congrats on your winning work. Sara
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/28/2020 1:54:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sara. Janice
Date: 10/28/2020 1:04:00 PM
Janice, your loving words about your grandmother took me into memories of my maternal grandmother. Like Gina, I am so glad you entered this loving tribute. Congratulations on your win - well deserved!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/28/2020 1:54:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sam. Janice
Date: 10/28/2020 11:51:00 AM
A blessing to read and I'm so glad you entered this. It's quite beautiful and impressive in your muse... God bless you and Congrats too
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/28/2020 12:14:00 PM
Regina, thank you so much for sponsoring the contest and for my placement. I am thrilled! Janice
Date: 10/20/2020 5:16:00 PM
A tearjerker for me. "What must I do now?" says it all. ~ To grandmothers everywhere! :) gw
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/20/2020 5:21:00 PM
Thanks so much, Gershon! Janice
Date: 10/20/2020 12:50:00 PM
Lovely tribute. My grandmother had ten children plus her children's children to raise during WWII and never raised her voice! Aloha! Rico
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/20/2020 2:29:00 PM
WOW! Your grandma sounds like a great lady. Thanks so much, Rico. Janice
Date: 10/20/2020 7:42:00 AM
Beautiful verse from the heart Janice, they could never do enough for you, even when you were all grown up and you never forget them. Tom
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/20/2020 10:52:00 AM
Thanks so much, Tom. Grandma had been a really busy woman in her younger years. She couldn't grasp the fact, when her mind stated failing, that there was no work for her to do! Janice
Date: 10/20/2020 6:58:00 AM
A lovely poem...
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/20/2020 10:53:00 AM
Thanks so much, S.O. Janice

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