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Some memories of silver sands, have faded like old photographs. But waves rush in to ponder on, incoming tides of happiness. Our shadows left upon the ground, are looking for a sea-shell found, and kites sail high upon the wind, to take us back, just once again We'd dig the sand, to paradise, to build a castle to the sky and filled our childhood fantasy with knights, and queens, and gallentry... Our hearts, carefree, as we were one, with earth and sky, with wind and sun Lone barefoot walks, along a beach, were followed by our impressed feet ~ The rugged coves, the misty air, the windswept trees, each mystery... can sweep me back, in time, and then, I see it still, so very clear,... where sky and ocean meet again Restless eucalyptus leaves, that scatter in the ruthless wind can bring to me a childhood shore, A place I left my heart and more Gulls that circle, high above Reminding me of days so loved Where castles made of sand were found Until the waves came crashing down Today I climb the winding path That lingers yet, in aftermath I'm dazzled by this new day's glare, reflected from those other years This place I knew when summer came Now warms my heart from winter's game Where blooming lilacs danced a tune And summer's end would come too soon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/18/2015 1:16:00 AM
A dazzling reverie of memory's here Carrie well done on the win..'
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Date: 5/16/2015 2:45:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your Memory of the sea win. LUV LINDA
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Date: 5/16/2015 10:20:00 AM
Nice win Carrie..... skat
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Date: 5/16/2015 2:03:00 AM
Congrats on your deservjng win carrie... loved this one... nad
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Date: 5/15/2015 6:33:00 PM
Such wonderful memories come alive in your exquisite imagery, Carrie. Your free verse reads like a poetic song of perfect rhythm. Congratulations on your well-deserved top win! 7+Fav, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/15/2015 6:05:00 PM
Beautiful enticing imagery. Congratulations on your win a 7 and hugs
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Date: 5/15/2015 12:23:00 PM
Very charming are the fond memories. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 5/15/2015 12:09:00 PM
Such beautiful memories Carrie many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/19/2012 1:01:00 AM
Oh, I really love your poem Carrie. I wish too that I could turn the clock back to my seaside days of childhood. I had a granny and granddad who lived by the sea and my mother had 6 sisters (my aunts). How I loved to visit them. Life is lonely without them now. Your poem lifted my heart.
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Date: 5/18/2012 5:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Carrie!! Beautiful!! big hugs,love ya deb
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Date: 5/18/2012 5:33:00 PM
Such a lovely memory! Congrad's on your big win! Light & Love
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Date: 5/18/2012 4:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Gail's "Sandcastles" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/18/2012 4:04:00 PM
Wonderful Carrie. I love the way you weave your words. So many beautiful and poignant phrases in this one. "Today I climb the winding path / That lingers with sweet aftrmath" and "Where castles made of sand were found / Until the waves came crashing down", just two lovely examples of your unique way of sharing your genius in our simplicity. Love your poems - this one included. Joe
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Date: 5/18/2012 10:45:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie this is lovley xx
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Date: 5/18/2012 10:24:00 AM
Carrie congrats on your win..David
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Date: 5/15/2012 10:49:00 AM
love this clever nostalgic piece, Carrie. Many congrats on all your wins : )
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Date: 5/14/2012 12:50:00 AM
Carrie everytime i read your poetry,i get lost in another world,the world of childhood dreams... I get carried away to the beautiful places you create and sometimes just want to stay there... Outstanding poem and going to my favs....... Charma
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Date: 5/13/2012 8:01:00 PM
* . . "I LOVE YOU BABY * I ALWAYS HAVE * 'MY BEAUTIFUL BELOVED.'" . . *
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Date: 5/17/2012 4:28:00 AM
UNBLOCK ME JOHN!I AM GOING TO SHOW YOU HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU!!
Date: 5/13/2012 7:51:00 PM
Smile ˜ "There You Are * 'The Most Beautiful Girl In The Whole Wide World * Precious, Priceless, Beautiful Carrie * My Love, Forevermore;'" John!:) ˜
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Date: 5/17/2012 4:29:00 AM
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Date: 5/13/2012 7:58:00 PM
...."Just Another Beautiful Favourite, By Such A Soft, Gifted, & Beautiful Poetess; 'A Queeen Of My Heart.'" *
Date: 5/13/2012 4:43:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one about your childhood memories.If for the sandcastle contest, reads like a winner to me..Good luck..Sara
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Date: 5/13/2012 2:26:00 PM
this is childhood memories at there best, Carrie, love how you weave your words here, your memories are so inviting. enjoyed. harry
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Date: 5/13/2012 1:33:00 PM
Ah, yes, summer's end... always far too soon... though fall has its pleasures as well. Lovely poem. I'm sure Gail will enjoy this as much as I did. Happy Mother's Day, Cyndi
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Date: 5/13/2012 10:43:00 AM
I love how you pulled in so many things related to the summer of your life, Carrie. you took this challenge up a notch!!
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