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When Castles Washed Away

Some memories of silver sands, have faded like old photographs. But waves rush in to ponder on, incoming tides of happiness. Our shadows left upon the ground, are looking for a sea-shell found, and kites sail high upon the wind, to take us back, just once again We'd dig the sand, to paradise, to build a castle to the sky and filled our childhood fantasy with knights, and queens, and gallentry... Our hearts, carefree, as we were one, with earth and sky, with wind and sun Lone barefoot walks, along a beach, were followed by our impressed feet ~ The rugged coves, the misty air, the windswept trees, each mystery... can sweep me back, in time, and then, I see it still, so very clear,... where sky and ocean meet again Restless eucalyptus leaves, that scatter in the ruthless wind can bring to me a childhood shore, A place I left my heart and more Gulls that circle, high above Reminding me of days so loved Where castles made of sand were found Until the waves came crashing down Today I climb the winding path That lingers yet, in aftermath I'm dazzled by this new day's glare, reflected from those other years This place I knew when summer came Now warms my heart from winter's game Where blooming lilacs danced a tune And summer's end would come too soon
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Maverick Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 1:16 AM
A dazzling reverie of memory's here Carrie well done on the win..'
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May 16, 2015 at 2:45 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your Memory of the sea win. LUV LINDA
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May 16, 2015 at 10:20 AM
Nice win Carrie..... skat
Relish Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 2:03 AM
Congrats on your deservjng win carrie... loved this one... nad
Haight Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 6:33 PM
Such wonderful memories come alive in your exquisite imagery, Carrie. Your free verse reads like a poetic song of perfect rhythm. Congratulations on your well-deserved top win! 7+Fav, Hugs, Sandra
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May 15, 2015 at 6:05 PM
Beautiful enticing imagery. Congratulations on your win a 7 and hugs
Konos Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 12:23 PM
Very charming are the fond memories. Congratulations on your win
Allison Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 12:09 PM
Such beautiful memories Carrie many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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May 19, 2012 at 1:01 AM
Oh, I really love your poem Carrie. I wish too that I could turn the clock back to my seaside days of childhood. I had a granny and granddad who lived by the sea and my mother had 6 sisters (my aunts). How I loved to visit them. Life is lonely without them now. Your poem lifted my heart.
Burch Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 5:56 PM
Congratulations on your win Carrie!! Beautiful!! big hugs,love ya deb
Guzzi Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 5:33 PM
Such a lovely memory! Congrad's on your big win! Light & Love
Brown Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 4:20 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Gail's "Sandcastles" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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May 18, 2012 at 4:04 PM
Wonderful Carrie. I love the way you weave your words. So many beautiful and poignant phrases in this one. "Today I climb the winding path / That lingers with sweet aftrmath" and "Where castles made of sand were found / Until the waves came crashing down", just two lovely examples of your unique way of sharing your genius in our simplicity. Love your poems - this one included. Joe
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May 18, 2012 at 10:45 AM
Congratulations Carrie this is lovley xx
Williams Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 10:24 AM
Carrie congrats on your win..David
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May 15, 2012 at 10:49 AM
love this clever nostalgic piece, Carrie. Many congrats on all your wins : )
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May 14, 2012 at 12:50 AM
Carrie everytime i read your poetry,i get lost in another world,the world of childhood dreams... I get carried away to the beautiful places you create and sometimes just want to stay there... Outstanding poem and going to my favs....... Charma
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May 13, 2012 at 8:01 PM
* . . "I LOVE YOU BABY * I ALWAYS HAVE * 'MY BEAUTIFUL BELOVED.'" . . *
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May 17, 2012 at 4:28 AM
UNBLOCK ME JOHN!I AM GOING TO SHOW YOU HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU!!
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May 13, 2012 at 7:51 PM
Smile ˜ "There You Are * 'The Most Beautiful Girl In The Whole Wide World * Precious, Priceless, Beautiful Carrie * My Love, Forevermore;'" John!:) ˜
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May 17, 2012 at 4:29 AM
UNBLOCK ME JOHN!I AM GOING TO SHOW YOU HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU!!
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May 13, 2012 at 7:58 PM
...."Just Another Beautiful Favourite, By Such A Soft, Gifted, & Beautiful Poetess; 'A Queeen Of My Heart.'" *
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May 13, 2012 at 4:43 PM
Enjoyed reading this one about your childhood memories.If for the sandcastle contest, reads like a winner to me..Good luck..Sara
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May 13, 2012 at 2:26 PM
this is childhood memories at there best, Carrie, love how you weave your words here, your memories are so inviting. enjoyed. harry
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May 13, 2012 at 1:33 PM
Ah, yes, summer's end... always far too soon... though fall has its pleasures as well. Lovely poem. I'm sure Gail will enjoy this as much as I did. Happy Mother's Day, Cyndi
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May 13, 2012 at 10:43 AM
I love how you pulled in so many things related to the summer of your life, Carrie. you took this challenge up a notch!!
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