When Bubbles Dissipate

Hearing the waters Translucent lavender flow Imagination Enriched blind, senses kick in Silence abounds, clothes in fall Naked to bare dip Porcelain to porcelain Glass of champagne chinks Lapping ripples in caress Submerged delights allure me Patiently I wait Her cue, for me to approach Encroach, I go through Eyes, eye, tanned undulations When said bubbles dissipate

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Date: 4/4/2015 7:26:00 PM
James, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Date: 3/31/2015 5:13:00 PM
An alluring poem that woos the senses.Well done! My compliments,James.
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James Fraser
Date: 3/31/2015 5:17:00 PM
Thank you kindly Ralph for visiting my poetry pages, much appreciated, James :)
Date: 1/3/2015 3:45:00 PM
the prince is rolling in raw delight... much enjoyed!..maybe you may want to check tanka's syl count... huggs
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James Fraser
Date: 1/5/2015 2:32:00 PM
Hiya Princess, so much raw delight I forgot to count - duh!! - but now addressed. Thank you kindly for highlighting said count, much appreciated - huggs, James :)
Date: 12/31/2014 3:44:00 PM
Beautifully penned and the imagery is over-the-fence! Well done.
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James Fraser
Date: 1/2/2015 3:15:00 PM
A wandering mind displayed again. Many thanks M.L.K. wishing you and yours a Healthy 2015, James :)x
Date: 12/28/2014 10:48:00 PM
A truly great write my friend. Hearing the waters Naked to bare dip Patiently I wait Deep images to present even deeper thoughts. Super 7 my friend and the first Tanka I have ever added to my fav list.. Bravo!!!!
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James Fraser
Date: 1/2/2015 3:23:00 PM
Thank you Robert, I'm humbled that my Tanka is recognised as the first in your Fav's. May I wish you and yours a Healthy 2015, and keep your Ink flowing. Your poetry friend, James :)
Date: 12/28/2014 10:23:00 AM
James, the imagery is sure a painting of seduction by your words.. i like how you used metaphors instead of direct terms but still it exudes the sexiness.. :) like best the 4th lines of 4th lines in the first set of two.. :) i like the idea of senses kicking in..! and well the so calm yet so delicate lapping and ripples.. :)! but well i love bubbles.. :)! reminds me of my youth!!! and still though love them til this day.. :)! .........olive eloisa :D!
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James Fraser
Date: 1/2/2015 3:37:00 PM
The Highlanders minds in wandering roam, as he witnesses his love in bubble filled foam. Thank you Olive for your always kind comments xx
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/28/2014 10:26:00 AM
your last line from the first set goes well with your fourth line on the second.. :)! bubbles dissipate what a captivating site that is... :)!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/28/2014 10:24:00 AM
like best the 4th lines from the first two sets of tanka*
Date: 12/28/2014 8:19:00 AM
Passionate work..Champagne for the special season..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate the encouraging review..Sara
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James Fraser
Date: 1/2/2015 3:39:00 PM
Your always welcome Sara xx
Date: 12/27/2014 7:46:00 PM
Great write James a worthy 7...Seren
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Date: 12/28/2014 6:18:00 AM
Thank you Seren for your kind words, always appreciated. have a lovely Sunday, James :)
Date: 12/27/2014 6:35:00 PM
oooh so sensual James my friend such divine imagery - a 7 from me:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/28/2014 5:34:00 AM
Haha! I try to stay away from writing such, but my imagination must be on a rubber band as they keep returning. Thanks kindly Jan, have a lovely Sunday, James xxx
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