When Azrael Comes Knocking

When Azrael* comes knocking, it won’t be with bony fists,
I believe, he’ll be a Doctor, with a cure,
Or a Maiden with her posies, a Knight jousting in the lists,
Or a gently whistling, mournful Troubadour.

When my time has come for leaving, I believe, I’ll punch him out,
Though I’ll break my hand in doing it, I’m sure
Or he’ll duck the blow and throw me o’er his shoulder like some lout
And I’ll have to go with him to Evermore.

I suppose he’s used to fearsome images, limned in the mind,
Where spectres, spooks and ghouls widely endure
But I think he’s just a jailer, come to open (and be kind)
The way out of a cage that serves, no more.

So, when he brings his medicine, I think I’ll swallow it,
And thank him for the friends he’s brought with him
I don’t believe he’ll be a jolly soul, although I wit
He’ll stroke my bald head, turn the lights to dim…

Or, when she shows me posies, with a certain tranquil air,
I deeply will inhale, nod, go to sleep,
And let her cool my hot brow with a hand that isn’t there,
Give thanks, she’s eased the passage I must keep.

Or, when he boldly rides at me, sharp angle to his spear,
I’ll bellow out a challenge, DING! his helm,
And keep my seat, take point through shield, ride at him without fear,
And know my lady watches o’er the realm.

Or, lastly, when he whistles a low tune that stills my heart,
I’ll join in, softly sing along with him,
As he plucks his sombre lute strings I will hum the descant part
And slowly fade away, heart in the trim.
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*Azrael – in Henry Wadsworth Longfellow’s poem of the same name, the Angel of Death

2/28/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 8:42 PM
Hello Andrew Fairchild, i hope you had a nice day. Enjoyed your poem. It iis GREAt! Have a nice evening my friend.
Fairchild Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 10:03 PM
I thank you kindly!
Awtry Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 1:45 PM
Back with congratulations!!!
Fairchild Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 2:24 PM
Thanks!
Gauthier Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 9:29 PM
A most entertaining poem. Congrats on your podium finish, Andrew.
Fairchild Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 3:00 AM
May we all be entertained, once in a while, by the things that usually scare us! Thank you for your good words!
One Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 7:36 AM
The angel of death will blow his trumpet on the day of judgment, apparently... Loved your deep write...
Fairchild Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 2:59 AM
Thank you for loving it! Yes, the trumpet on the judgment day will be an attention-getter, that's for sure!
Krutsinger Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 5:26 AM
This has a Mark Twain Dr. Seuss feel about it. "So, when he brings his medicine, I think I’ll swallow it, And thank him for the friends he’s brought with him" Love this one, Andrew!
Fairchild Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 10:51 PM
Thank You! I can't believe I am saying it, but it was fun to write!
Awtry Avatar
March 1, 2019 at 8:08 AM
There is a child soul and wisdom both in this piece. I picture a little boy puffing out his chest...but then the acceptance too. I suppose that’s what most folks are (poets anyway) wisdom and child soul. “And know my lady watches o’er the realm”—so good. This is a FAV for me.
Fairchild Avatar
March 1, 2019 at 9:05 AM
My soul is a little, little child, and lives in a cabinet carefully filed. A thoughtful comment. I believe our wisdom comes from on High, and a little from our inner child or 'child soul'. Courage is the coming of age of the heart, and patience is the coming of age of the soul, it has been said. Thank you kindly!
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