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Constance's Beautiful Rubaiyat Contest ~ 1/19/26

When Autumn Leaves Take Flight

"I hope I will be as accepting as an Autumn leaf 
that looks up at the sky when it's time to die... 
graciously thanking God for the gift of my life."
                                                          ~ by poet


Autumn's leaves begin taking flight
I feel chagrinned, without delight
Are they whispering and sighing?
Purged in death~ their seasonal plight

Crimson faded; sadly dying
There's no whimpering or crying
Not a word uttered, nor tears spilled
With Nature,  they are complying

I wonder... if they were free willed
would they prefer to be instilled 
with more life if they had the votes?
Covered in snow, would they be chilled?

Perhaps, they'd choose as antidotes,
voices escaping from their throats.
Would they survive the coldest days
wearing snowflakes for Winter coats?
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La France Avatar
February 14, 2026 at 2:22 AM
Lin, your poem is so beautifully penned, each word and line perfection. Sorry you missed my contest because this poem would soar right to the top~
Lane Avatar
February 14, 2026 at 3:51 AM
Thank you for reading it, Constance. ;-)
Beaufort Avatar
January 25, 2026 at 12:22 PM
Lin, this is certainly something to think about. Leaves can teach us a lot if we could only understand the message. I love how you ask questions that lead me to ponder the lessons nature has for us to consider. Thanks and smiles!!
Lane Avatar
January 25, 2026 at 12:33 PM
Hi Duke and thanks for acknowledging my sympathy for their plight. I’m Smiling.
Daniel Avatar
January 19, 2026 at 8:37 PM
Lovely thoughts here, Lin:)
Lane Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 8:25 AM
Thanks a lot, Joanna.
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