When Autumn Comes

When Autumn comes and visits me And Summers end I can foresee Remaining years are on the wane Cherished days won't come again My shackles soon set free Life like the deciduous tree Watches it's adornment flee And embraces falls refrain When Autumn comes When I respond to the decree And feel the chill wash over me When I no longer can remain My life no longer can sustain I'll with my soul to heaven flee When Autumn comes

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Date: 6/16/2013 8:39:00 AM
Beautiful poem.- Edward
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Bob Quigley
Date: 6/17/2013 11:40:00 AM
Thank you Edward. Much appreciated.
Date: 2/7/2012 7:34:00 AM
Congratulations to you on your win in Brian Strand 's "Whatever Again" contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/7/2012 8:00:00 AM
Thank you Carol
Date: 2/6/2012 2:37:00 PM
Congrats, Bob. Beautiful piece. Well deserved win. Enjoyed. Nice going. Thanks for your kind words. Best to you and yours. Ralph
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Date: 2/6/2012 2:43:00 PM
Appreciate it Ralph
Date: 2/6/2012 8:29:00 AM
Yes, those cherished days are in the past and won't come again. Beautiful poem you have penned. Thank you for your comments. love phyl
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Date: 2/6/2012 11:02:00 AM
Thanks Phyllis. Very much appreciated
Date: 2/5/2012 11:44:00 PM
This is so lovely... beautiful imagery! congrats :)
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Bob Quigley
Date: 2/6/2012 11:02:00 AM
Thanks Katie
Date: 2/5/2012 10:03:00 PM
congrats Bob on a wonderful win for this sensational poetry.. so lovely the imagery.. and even more intense second time read luv..
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Bob Quigley
Date: 2/6/2012 11:03:00 AM
Many thanks Linda-Marie
Date: 2/5/2012 9:54:00 PM
Well written poem Bob.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 2/6/2012 11:03:00 AM
Thanks Bob
Date: 2/5/2012 9:07:00 PM
I am touched by this beautiful poem! Congrats on your win. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/5/2012 9:45:00 PM
Very much appreciated Rhonda
Date: 2/5/2012 12:35:00 PM
Beautiful piece, Bob. Many congrats on your wins : )
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Bob Quigley
Date: 2/5/2012 12:58:00 PM
Thanks Jack
Date: 2/5/2012 9:54:00 AM
of serene sentiments that warm my heart, bob.. you are summer to me--- a tremendous write, dear friend!..:) huggs!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 2/5/2012 10:04:00 AM
Very kind Nette. Thank you very much
Date: 2/5/2012 9:03:00 AM
Quite a powerful write Bob, you conveyed a tranquil ease in these lines, and i thank you for your congratulations..which contest was it though..? 'I wonder...)
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Bob Quigley
Date: 2/5/2012 10:04:00 AM
Thank you Joe. It was Change for the Meter
Date: 2/5/2012 8:57:00 AM
Nature is beautiful, beautiful story poem,nice rhyme.I enjoyed reading it.God bless you.Erich P.S. I like the poem centered.I'm trying to center my poems but I don't know how to do it,could you tell how to center the poems,Thank you.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 2/5/2012 10:05:00 AM
Thank you Erich for stopping by and commenting
Date: 2/4/2012 10:06:00 PM
This is such a delightful write Bob. And a joy to read- thank you for sharing and also Thank you for your kind comments on my work too, brenda : )
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Bob Quigley
Date: 2/4/2012 10:57:00 PM
And my thanks to you Brenda
Date: 2/4/2012 3:02:00 PM
What a lovely way of thinking. Very nice Bob and thank you for your kind remarks. Love, joyce
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Bob Quigley
Date: 2/4/2012 5:04:00 PM
And my thanks to you as well
Date: 2/4/2012 2:21:00 PM
deeply intense words penned Bob.. this for, is so apropos for the thoughts engaging the reader.. an exquisite creation luv..
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Bob Quigley
Date: 2/4/2012 2:59:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments Linda-Marie
Date: 2/4/2012 12:20:00 PM
Bob, it is a BEAUTIFUL poem you written !!It was a pleasure to take a visit to your poetry pages to day! ....."When Autumn coms......." - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Bob Quigley
Date: 2/4/2012 2:06:00 PM
Very kind comments indeed Anne Lise. Thank you so much
Date: 2/4/2012 11:23:00 AM
Beautiful, Bob.- Autumn as the harbinger of death, And death really so beautiful. At least this is my feeling for what you project. Thanks for reading my stuff. daver
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Bob Quigley
Date: 2/4/2012 11:52:00 AM
Thanks Dave
Date: 2/4/2012 10:57:00 AM
Awesome, Bob. Enjoyed. Nice job. Ralph
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Bob Quigley
Date: 2/4/2012 11:05:00 AM
Thanks Ralph
Date: 2/3/2012 12:44:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem, Bob. Thank you for sharing. Love, Kim
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Bob Quigley
Date: 2/3/2012 1:52:00 PM
Thank you for commenting Kim.
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