When Autumn Comes

When Autumn comes and visits me And Summers end I can foresee Remaining years are on the wane Cherished days won't come again My shackles soon set free Life like the deciduous tree Watches it's adornment flee And embraces falls refrain When Autumn comes When I respond to the decree And feel the chill wash over me When I no longer can remain My life no longer can sustain I'll with my soul to heaven flee When Autumn comes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Orozco Avatar
June 16, 2013 at 8:39 AM
Beautiful poem.- Edward
Quigley Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 11:40 AM
Thank you Edward. Much appreciated.
Brown Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 7:34 AM
Congratulations to you on your win in Brian Strand 's "Whatever Again" contest Bob. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 8:00 AM
Thank you Carol
Taylor Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 2:37 PM
Congrats, Bob. Beautiful piece. Well deserved win. Enjoyed. Nice going. Thanks for your kind words. Best to you and yours. Ralph
Quigley Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 2:43 PM
Appreciate it Ralph
Babcock Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 8:29 AM
Yes, those cherished days are in the past and won't come again. Beautiful poem you have penned. Thank you for your comments. love phyl
Quigley Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 11:02 AM
Thanks Phyllis. Very much appreciated
Telling Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 11:44 PM
This is so lovely... beautiful imagery! congrats :)
Quigley Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 11:02 AM
Thanks Katie
Sweetheart Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 10:03 PM
congrats Bob on a wonderful win for this sensational poetry.. so lovely the imagery.. and even more intense second time read luv..
Quigley Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 11:03 AM
Many thanks Linda-Marie
Pettit Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 9:54 PM
Well written poem Bob.
Quigley Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 11:03 AM
Thanks Bob
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 9:07 PM
I am touched by this beautiful poem! Congrats on your win. Blessings, Rhonda
Quigley Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 9:45 PM
Very much appreciated Rhonda
Horne Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 12:35 PM
Beautiful piece, Bob. Many congrats on your wins : )
Quigley Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 12:58 PM
Thanks Jack
Onclaud Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 9:54 AM
of serene sentiments that warm my heart, bob.. you are summer to me--- a tremendous write, dear friend!..:) huggs!
Quigley Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 10:04 AM
Very kind Nette. Thank you very much
Maverick Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 9:03 AM
Quite a powerful write Bob, you conveyed a tranquil ease in these lines, and i thank you for your congratulations..which contest was it though..? 'I wonder...)
Quigley Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 10:04 AM
Thank you Joe. It was Change for the Meter
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February 5, 2012 at 8:57 AM
Nature is beautiful, beautiful story poem,nice rhyme.I enjoyed reading it.God bless you.Erich P.S. I like the poem centered.I'm trying to center my poems but I don't know how to do it,could you tell how to center the poems,Thank you.
Quigley Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 10:05 AM
Thank you Erich for stopping by and commenting
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February 4, 2012 at 10:06 PM
This is such a delightful write Bob. And a joy to read- thank you for sharing and also Thank you for your kind comments on my work too, brenda : )
Quigley Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 10:57 PM
And my thanks to you Brenda
Johnson Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 3:02 PM
What a lovely way of thinking. Very nice Bob and thank you for your kind remarks. Love, joyce
Quigley Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 5:04 PM
And my thanks to you as well
Sweetheart Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 2:21 PM
deeply intense words penned Bob.. this for, is so apropos for the thoughts engaging the reader.. an exquisite creation luv..
Quigley Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 2:59 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments Linda-Marie
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February 4, 2012 at 12:20 PM
Bob, it is a BEAUTIFUL poem you written !!It was a pleasure to take a visit to your poetry pages to day! ....."When Autumn coms......." - oxox love Anne-Lise
Quigley Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 2:06 PM
Very kind comments indeed Anne Lise. Thank you so much
Austin Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 11:23 AM
Beautiful, Bob.- Autumn as the harbinger of death, And death really so beautiful. At least this is my feeling for what you project. Thanks for reading my stuff. daver
Quigley Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 11:52 AM
Thanks Dave
Taylor Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 10:57 AM
Awesome, Bob. Enjoyed. Nice job. Ralph
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February 4, 2012 at 11:05 AM
Thanks Ralph
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February 3, 2012 at 12:44 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem, Bob. Thank you for sharing. Love, Kim
Quigley Avatar
February 3, 2012 at 1:52 PM
Thank you for commenting Kim.
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