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When azaleas spread their deep pink cups I hold my breath and hope for form to hold an hour before they begin their twisting dance to dust. O beauties, did my touch bruise the space about your faltering grace?

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Date: 4/5/2023 9:28:00 AM
What a lovely write. Wish you would write more. Have a wonderful day writing away................
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Date: 3/31/2023 6:26:00 PM
Greetings Bill, Excellent descriptions like "twisting dance" to capture a flower burst. Plus, memorable concluding 4 lines to personify azaleas in a rhetorical question. Top notch posting! Best wishes, Brian
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