Wheels

wheels churning every scenario what if posted on October 10, 2018

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/10/2018 5:46:00 PM

What if's can often be so sad.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/10/2018 7:39:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Andrea. No regrets.

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 10/10/2018 1:42:00 PM

Very evocative- but this could go either way! I picture how my mind races sometimes, running down all the "what ifs" (sometimes imaging the good, sometimes the bad)... Well penned! ;)

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/10/2018 4:29:00 PM

True, need to look at both and bad.

Bernard Chan

Date: 10/10/2018 1:30:00 PM

This poem somehow makes me sad, and I mean that in a good way, if I'm making sense.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/10/2018 4:30:00 PM

It can feel very nostalgic. Thanks for your lovely visit, Bernard.

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/10/2018 9:57:00 AM

Wheels go round and round lol...but your verse stands still...enjoyed my friend...love & light...^WW^

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/10/2018 10:34:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, WW.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/10/2018 9:37:00 AM

Heh, yep <3

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/10/2018 10:34:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Maureen.