What's the P-Itch

At midnight Arthur fell asleep.
It was prevented to be deep,
he felt an itching on his head.
The unknown made the man´s flesh creep,

it maddened him. But look ahead!
He stumbled on the book he´d read,
then took a mirror. Look, a flea!
He slew the beast and went to bed.

Soon after on poor Arthur´s knee
he felt an itching. Look! A bee,
disturbed by unfamiliar light,
went for a walk on him. So he

got up again to start a fight.
The bee seemed to be out of sight,
but then with rabid battle cry
he hit the target. What a night!

Dropped into bed with a deep sigh,
in thick of fight night had gone by.
He triumphantly clapped his hands
... and felt an itching. Look, a fly!






May 16, 2022
Rubaiyat Contest Poetry Contest
sponsored by Sotto Poet 
8 syllables per line and 5 stanzas
rhyme aaba-bbcb-ccdc-dded-eefe.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Alex Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 8:16 PM
Beautiful narration. With all details. Congratulations!
Bradinger Avatar
June 24, 2022 at 7:44 AM
Thank you, Alex!
Poet Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 5:05 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest Anton, you did a wonderful job in this poem. Best regards
Bradinger Avatar
June 24, 2022 at 7:43 AM
Thank you so much for your friendly words! All the best!
Chamberlain Avatar
May 17, 2022 at 12:43 AM
Brilliant! I really enjoyed reading your poem this morning. It made me think of World War 1 soldiers in trenches covered in lice. Sounds like it's going to a long night.
Bradinger Avatar
May 17, 2022 at 10:27 PM
Thank you very much, Joanna! I´ve submitted a number of cheerless poems so far, so it was high time for a jokey one.
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