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What's the P-Itch

At midnight Arthur fell asleep. It was prevented to be deep, he felt an itching on his head. The unknown made the man´s flesh creep, it maddened him. But look ahead! He stumbled on the book he´d read, then took a mirror. Look, a flea! He slew the beast and went to bed. Soon after on poor Arthur´s knee he felt an itching. Look! A bee, disturbed by unfamiliar light, went for a walk on him. So he got up again to start a fight. The bee seemed to be out of sight, but then with rabid battle cry he hit the target. What a night! Dropped into bed with a deep sigh, in thick of fight night had gone by. He triumphantly clapped his hands ... and felt an itching. Look, a fly! May 16, 2022 Rubaiyat Contest Poetry Contest sponsored by Sotto Poet 8 syllables per line and 5 stanzas rhyme aaba-bbcb-ccdc-dded-eefe.

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Date: 6/13/2022 8:16:00 PM
Beautiful narration. With all details. Congratulations!
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Anton Bradinger
Date: 6/24/2022 7:44:00 AM
Thank you, Alex!
Date: 6/13/2022 5:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest Anton, you did a wonderful job in this poem. Best regards
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Anton Bradinger
Date: 6/24/2022 7:43:00 AM
Thank you so much for your friendly words! All the best!
Date: 5/17/2022 12:43:00 AM
Brilliant! I really enjoyed reading your poem this morning. It made me think of World War 1 soldiers in trenches covered in lice. Sounds like it's going to a long night.
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Anton Bradinger
Date: 5/17/2022 10:27:00 PM
Thank you very much, Joanna! I´ve submitted a number of cheerless poems so far, so it was high time for a jokey one.

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