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Like sand and water Side by side But never really mix Inexplicable togetherness As a metaphor And impossible to fix

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Date: 8/18/2023 8:14:00 AM
Don’t try fix what isn’t broken Dilly, even the waves smashing upon the sand, Yes it just works somehow! point taken it’s a good one! Cheers David
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Date: 8/18/2023 9:16:00 AM
Thanks David, you've taken a slightly different interpretation which is actually quite lovely - it's nice that can happen with poetry :)

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