What's the Buzz Haiku

wonder of spring
   mystery and beauty bring...
      let creation sing

lilting glory songs
   righting all of winter's wrongs...
       tames the heart that longs

summer's 'round the bend
   chill of darkness soon to end...
        blooms and buds ascend



**for contest"What's The Buzz"
sponsored by Carol Brown
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 11, 2011 at 7:48 AM
Congrats Deb on your 1st place win with this wonderful Haiku!--kashinath
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March 10, 2011 at 3:48 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Freeman Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 10:09 AM
A pleasure dear one to see you again at the top Deb. Congratulations on your worthy first place win. Agape, Moses
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March 10, 2011 at 9:12 AM
The wonderful sights and feelings we associate with spring come through beautifully in your haiku, Deb. Congratulations on your well-deserved first place! Love, Carolyn
George   Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 8:51 AM
Simply beautiful, Deb. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
Brown Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 6:06 AM
Congratulations on the win in my contest . Thank you for supporting my contest and my decision to run my contest my way. Love, Carol
Mannan Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 12:03 AM
Yes it i time for the blooms and buds to ascend. Lovely. many congrats dear friend.
Gorelick Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 7:54 PM
Very smooth flow to this, congrats on your big win. BG
Dufresne Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 5:01 PM
very very nice Deb. congratulations to you
Richards Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 3:37 PM
Has a note of inspiration and hope ...just a lovely poem! Congratulations on your number 1 !!
Guzzi Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 2:45 PM
The cycle of life ahh yes! Always inspiring. Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Sweetheart Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 2:16 PM
Congrats Deb on your super win of first place in Carol's contest.. a thrilling write luv..
Johnson Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 1:56 PM
A happy haiku. Hope it is just around the end. Congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 1:52 PM
Hey, i 'm glad there was a winner circle so I could finally see yours, Deb. I enjoyed the message of yours. Congrats on your big win.
Mehta Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 1:45 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Carol, Deb
Anderson Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 12:39 PM
Wonderful Haikus...good luck in the contest...Jimmy
Pettit Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 10:32 PM
Three great rhyming haiku entries for Carol's contest. She should give this entry a lot of consideration.
Onclaud Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 9:43 PM
whooot, this whole smyphony sings, deb... so lyrical;i likey lots!! winning wishs to you! :) huggs, nette
Roberts Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 7:48 PM
love it, this is great Deb, good luck in the contest
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