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A Collaboration with Lin Lane. 

 

The youthful memories I have did grate Upon my innermost self and I’d cry For my depressed spirit which longed to die And halt life tainted with anger and hate Yet now in a manic marvelous state Akin to alcohol’s euphoric high My heart’s core renewed can soar to the sky How this came to be I’ll try to relate I trapped thorny issues behind a gate Forgiveness has become a great ally Love found everyday gives reason to fly Like a balloon unencumbered with weight While able to breathe and greet each sunrise Living and giving seem like the best prize ***** Youth represents life of song to be sung Laughing our loud when memories are made But you wept as your spirit became frayed Though now you’re wiser than when you were young Having crossed the threshold of angst that clung See how clover's nectar can be arrayed Let your heart rejoice and not be afraid As delight comes from strands of pearls restrung The door's ajar—from the cage you've been sprung Take wing knowing happiness will not fade A heart’s compassion will never abrade Where you go now—no place is too far-flung Revel in moonlight and dawn's painted skies An attitude change has opened your eyes Lin, working with you is a pleasure and does bring a grand internal and external smile.

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Date: 4/30/2025 2:30:00 PM
Gosh I don't think I have seen you write anything other than limericks . Amazing. Did you do one part while Lin did the other? Or did you do all of it as one? I feel like some parts of the top could be from Lin but possibly she did more of the bottom?
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Date: 4/29/2025 10:08:00 AM
Such poetic brilliance in your collaboration that flows so well together and highlights so many aspect of life and growing, and time, how we learn so much through experience from forgiving not just others but ourselves for angst and more that now seems locked away as thorns that arent welcome. I really love the lines "I trapped thorny issues behind a gate" and "See how clover's nectar can be arrayed" creative and soulfully moving and very sincere write! And your rhymes are sublime! Fave this is. Pleasure reading you both today! Sending you light dear linnersz and duke! Well done on your flawless collab
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Date: 4/29/2025 9:10:00 AM
What an amazing collaboration between two outstanding poets. This poem covers the path from despair to joy, focusing on human growth and the ability to change through forgiveness, love, and an open heart. It compares youth's anguish with the wisdom and enjoyment that might come from adulthood. The poem also recalls childhood memories of despair and rage before changing to manic pleasure and rejuvenation. It stresses the worth of overcoming previous traumas and approaching life with a positive outlook. I notably enjoy the rich and evocative language, which includes sensitive terms like "grate," "depressed," "forgiveness," "euphoric," and "anguish." This diction emphasizes the contrast between previous troubles and the current level of bliss. Blessings to Duke and Lin.
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Date: 4/29/2025 8:15:00 AM
- You can't sit and wait for "the big lightning strike" the older you get, the more you know what you want in a partner ... - "While able to breathe and greet each sunrise Living and giving seem like the best prize" - A lovely collaboration Duke & Lin :) - hugs
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