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*Image of Ladybugs by Pixabay. What's Bugging You a ladybug lands another land in the midst a breathtaking view hey there hey there ladybug come right here and let us hug it's nice to hold you're very bold but I'm a lonely spark plug. if you can't believe your own eyes then close them~~and use your other eye 2022 January 29 *2nd Place* Charlie Hai-Lim-Ku ~~Charles Messina: Judged 2022 March 11 *HMS: 5,7,5 - 7,7,4,4,7 - 17

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Charles Messina

Date: 3/16/2022 7:47:00 PM

Aloha William, sorry it took so long to comment on this brilliant and fun write. You did a great job combining these forms. My belated Congrats on your win in my contest! All the very best...Charlie God Bless

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/16/2022 8:22:00 PM

Aole pilikia--Hawaiian slang for--no problem. Methinks the ku's made-up for my limey, Charlie, but I had fun in the process my friend, Aloha~William

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/14/2022 3:55:00 AM

I have read your winning entry and was delighted to see it on the winners' list. Congratulations on your place of honor. Way to go. Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/14/2022 9:25:00 AM

I am truly grateful, Sara, for your visit and thoughtful sharing my friend, Aloha~William

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/11/2022 12:27:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write and picture. I love your 2 ladybugs. Have a blessed day.....................

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/11/2022 3:07:00 PM

Most appreciated, Paula, on all your wondrous counts, and to yours as always, Aloha~William

I Am Anaya

Date: 3/11/2022 8:05:00 AM

Awe, beautiful and sweet. Congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/11/2022 8:40:00 AM

Thank you, Anaya, and my compliments as well my friend, Aloha~William

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/11/2022 5:04:00 AM

Great moral. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/11/2022 8:39:00 AM

Methinks it to be, thanks, Christuraj, Aloha~William

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/29/2022 5:29:00 AM

William, your poetry, as well as the insights it contains, are excellent. My friend, you've done a fantastic job. "Win Big!"

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/29/2022 8:07:00 AM

Thanks, Lasaad, for the encouragement, much appreciated my friend, Aloha!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/29/2022 3:42:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this one today. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/29/2022 4:12:00 AM

I dunno, Sara, it was either the plug or a slug but I couldn't see it first off as huggable, ergo, fingers crossed, thanks for the opt'ism, Aloha!