What'Ll I Do

What will I do without him
   who used come to the door
   and ask me to play with snowballs 
In the sun?
Go out and play with
   snowballs of my own?
No fun!

What will I do without him
   who used to tap at the window
   and bring me the dark sky
Shattered with dawn?
Close warm sheltered inside
   Will I watch the night
Go on?

No! I'll run to the streets and the highways;
   I'll shout to the closed-in ears;
   into the wind that buries the sound of my voice
I'll whisper when footsteps come near
   There's someone living
In here! 


(A nod to Athol Fugard's "People Are Living There")
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kaufman Avatar
April 12, 2023 at 7:08 AM
this is so well done Elizabeth, especially the ending, "there's some one living in here",
Mccann Avatar
April 12, 2023 at 6:14 PM
Kind of you to reply, Nancy. The title was from a play by Athol Fugard in South Africa, about the dire situation of the Bantu people living in the kraal. I borrowed it for a personal angle. Elizabeth
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October 27, 2022 at 5:03 PM
Exactly, Linda. I'm digging up an old talk I gave, "The Inner Companion," about consulting our inner self for guidance, not just the hype, the popular stance. Elizabeth
Fowler Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 8:38 AM
Love it Elizabeth! Let's not forget our ego. It has its value. Whatever is outside, there is always someone in there. :)
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October 16, 2022 at 6:18 AM
Elizabeth, I'm not going to pretend that I understood all that you have written here other than to say that I picked up on themes of loss, loneliness and the search and desire for happiness with a splash of the human condition running through your psychological piece. Whether I am on track or many miles away from your original ideas, I have to say that I found the whole piece intriguing. And a great read. Cheers - Gary
Mccann Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 3:46 PM
Thanks, Gary! A great reply! I've had that last line rattling around in my brain since seeing Fugard's play some 40 years ago! Elizabeth
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October 15, 2022 at 5:10 PM
Wow! Total isolation. Brilliant, moving work. Following a great loss I imagine, a soulmate perhaps. No one sees us fully as we are (living, feeling, throbbing)...except a rare few...and, I like to think that my God also in my case. But we all have different personal beliefs, not to try and force our own on others. Great writing evokes many different interpretations...and maybe all correct. I am generally far out of kilt, different, sort of like the theme of your fine poem. Thank you for sharing.
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October 15, 2022 at 6:00 PM
You have really shored up my spirits today, Joe! I was feeling definitely ho-hum. Yes, I waited until my 70's to meet a special person. That's too long; health starts to intervene. But I still wouldn't trade it! Thank you. Elizabeth
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October 14, 2022 at 4:54 PM
Love the "Waddle," Robert. I was surprised by the Ducks, thought it was Beavers, but then I'm originally from the other O, where we did have some of both. Thanks for the cheer-up! Elizabeth
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October 13, 2022 at 6:53 PM
That's the spirit, you will survive, by the way. WADDLE I DO--the motto of the Oregon State Ducks! Lol Robert
Wolf Avatar
October 13, 2022 at 3:21 PM
I'm with Evelyn Judy Buehler (below): Intriguing and Captivating... and I'll add poignant! All of my thumbs up, Elizabeth. :) gw
Mccann Avatar
October 13, 2022 at 3:57 PM
Aw, gw, you always make me smile! And thanks for the thumbs; though I'm known for being all thumbs, it's never enough! Liz
Slaughter Avatar
October 13, 2022 at 11:06 AM
I certainly like the mysterious atmosphere of this piece, Elizabeth. Or should I say...esoteric?
Mccann Avatar
October 13, 2022 at 2:51 PM
It's on a need-to-know! Thanks, Jim! Elizabeth
Dietrich Avatar
October 13, 2022 at 10:14 AM
hmm, it sounds like a ghost to me. I've been watching lots of ghost stories lately. Quite intriguing poetry.
Mccann Avatar
October 13, 2022 at 2:50 PM
Oh, gosh! He said he was a phantom but I didn't believe him! Elizabeth
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October 12, 2022 at 8:52 PM
I enjoyed this intriguing and captivating poem, Elizabeth. :)
Mccann Avatar
October 13, 2022 at 2:44 AM
Thank you, Evelyn. So kind of you to comment. Elizabeth
Leffanta Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 11:50 AM
I remember the song, and can say prepare to welcome him in your dreams! Aloha!
Mccann Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 6:54 PM
I'll keep a sleepy eye out! No matter what I say, you're always a step ahead of me! Elizabeth
Poet Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 7:30 AM
Elizabeth, you have written a poem that is really fascinating. It's thought-provoking and beautifully done.
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October 12, 2022 at 6:56 PM
I'm so glad you liked it, Sotto! You set a high bench mark yourself always! Elizabeth
Mccann Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 2:10 AM
It's great to hear from you, Victor. Thank you for the think! Elizabeth
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October 12, 2022 at 2:06 AM
Interesting poem. It urges you to think hard. Well done.
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