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Whatever You Say, Dear

It's Friday! And it’s “Girls’ Night Out"! His favorite dinner and wine we shared! We give each other a little bit space, at least, once every other week Any given night, always a special treat, we may choose to cuddle instead Whatever desires the other may have, each makes sure to prioritize That’s the routine in our love nest; it’s just how we sail this boat Dressed in stretched jeans; curves seemly more pronounced and I feel burning eyes upon me Yes, I know that look so very well, but tonight, that can’t go down To put him off, I attempt light conversation; to sort of change his unspoken suggestion I nonchalantly ask, “What game are you planning to watch, Love?" With a silent, hope, that craving eyes would deflect Deliberately, I avoid his intense stare, speaking loudly, a language I know too well Too late! In just two steps he’s all over me; and I melt like butter in the sun “Can’t you call? Say you’ll be a little late, hmm?” He whispers in my ear “No, Love, the last time I did that, we fell asleep, remember?” “Look, I’ll set the alarm, just one hour will do; I’m missing you already”. Like a kid, he begins to pout and guilt raps at my heart’s door Planting warm butterfly kisses the expanse of my neck Murmuring low, words he knows I love to hear And though I feign disinterest, persistent hands unrelenting “Will you call and tell her? Will you, or I’ll call if you like?” He may be unaware, though it’s hard to tell, as there are no secrets which I can maintain In my mind I’ve already begun to disrobe him; my favorite dance flats cast aside On the verge of giving in, I raise up my head to gaze those smoldering eyes In that instant, I’m captured; cornered, again His brilliant smile from lips so soft appears plastered on his chiseled face Fully aware he’s won like so many times before He picks up the phone, hits speed dial with one hand free; The other is wrapped snugly 'round my waist as I admire his one track mind “Hi Caitlin! Listen... …Yes, she’ll be late. Now, how'd you know?” And her laughter rings throughout cyber space as she's made a prudent guess “That’s fine, I just know!” She replied, still chuckling. “Ask her to call me before she leaves, will you?” “Oh sure! Whatever you say, dear.” ~*~
For: Francine's "Whatever You Say, Dear" Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/25/2011 12:04:00 PM
Congratulations Annalise, on your well deserved win in Francine Roberts's contest " Whatever You Say, Dear". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/19/2011 12:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/18/2011 11:27:00 PM
Way to go, Annalise. Congratulations on attaining honorable mention in Francine's contest.
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Date: 2/18/2011 7:29:00 PM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Annalise. Nice going. Have a great weekend. xxxRalph
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Date: 2/18/2011 7:09:00 PM
Great Job Annalise, congrtulations on your poem honored success in Frqancine's cool contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/18/2011 6:22:00 PM
Congrats Annalise on your HM in Francine's contest my friend.. we shall enjoy our honors together again my friend.. with luv..
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:53:00 PM
congrats on your HM in my contest Annalise
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Date: 2/18/2011 7:37:00 AM
Another lightning bomb.
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Date: 2/17/2011 3:26:00 PM
Hope you really didn't mind missing out on the girls night out Annalise. Kidding, of course. You were captured and surrendered to passion. I bet Caitlin didn't mind waiting. Good luck in the contest, Diane
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Date: 2/17/2011 1:23:00 PM
This is really good writing, so descriptive!It's really cool the way you used "whatever you say,dear" at the bottom and then built the story DOWN to that clincher line!
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Date: 2/17/2011 10:15:00 AM
Sweetie, I found this both funny and passionate. I can just see you trying to slip out of the house as he decides he's ready for action. It's so cute how your friend Caitlin knew what was going on. If I had some girlfriends nearby, I know I'd want to spend time with them. But if you have a guy who's this passionate, you are lucky indeed! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/17/2011 1:20:00 AM
Haha girls' night out the window ;) What a very interesting take on the challenge, Annalise-- -- I think this will do very well in the contest --nikko :)
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Date: 2/16/2011 6:38:00 PM
Enjoyed very intricate but enjoyable write, Annalise
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Date: 2/16/2011 3:02:00 PM
Oh I know that pout so well ... but actually Ron is always telling me I pout when I don't get MY way..haha.. this is a wonderful and unique write Annalise my friend.. a great entry to by pass all others entered for this is so true to life.. good luck .. thankxx for the sweet comments on my Poetry in Motion..luv..
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Date: 2/16/2011 1:09:00 PM
How clever a story you have woven into this Girls night out!!! Great job, Annalise!!
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Date: 2/16/2011 10:52:00 AM
Annalise - thanks, now I need to go take a cold shower!!!! WOW - Superb. Good lluck in the contest. Joe
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Date: 2/16/2011 10:34:00 AM
Good story here.Goodluck in the contest-----kashinath
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Date: 2/16/2011 10:24:00 AM
this is not showing up on the contest page , please check that you have entered it
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Date: 2/16/2011 9:37:00 AM
A very nice "HOT" write...Enjoyed very much....JAM
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Date: 2/16/2011 9:25:00 AM
anna, you almost missed the girls' night out for this charmers of yours!! lol, what a " dear!" enjoyed the whole fabulous storyline! best winning lick to you! ;) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/16/2011 9:05:00 AM
a wonderful great write. it takes a patient reader to capture the blessings of knowledge hidden in this poem. melody maker.
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