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I think you know where this is heading. These were his words to me. The truth was I had no clue. How could I know? Perhaps his tone was an indication. The undertone in his voice. His confidence that I somehow understood. There was something visceral about it. Something raw and inevitable. Like fate was on automatic pilot and we were powerless in its tracks. . let the pieces fall . where they may . ~ snowflakes in the sea Published in my 24-page photo/anthology book ~THE RIGHT TIME~ 2023 AP: Honorable Mention 2023, Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on September 1, 2022 for contest A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE sponsored by BRIAN STRAND Originally posted on August 27, 2022

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Date: 8/27/2022 12:00:00 PM
Hello Line, He must had a reason to feel this way. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/28/2022 2:32:00 PM
Hello Lin, you are very welcome. Hugs.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/28/2022 7:49:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Darlene ~
Date: 8/27/2022 11:44:00 AM
Rather cold and calculated he seemed to be. You've made a good comparison of him with the snow.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/28/2022 7:49:00 AM
This can be taken in soooo many ways ~ and they'd all be right

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