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What You Did

Ice in my eyes Ice in my veins Ice in my heart Ice in my gaze. I sat there in my dreary haze WAtching little "replays" Of what you did in those days. You shut me out. Locked me in. To try to save me from the din. But what you didn't realize, Pain in my eyes The tears on my face That you were the one putting me in that place. you left me there for days, seeming as I did something wrong. I was broken, beaten and weak. But you broke me, I picked up the pieces and put me back together... Stronger than ever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/21/2012 6:26:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Chloiih. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/19/2012 12:00:00 PM
I hope you like it? this was my first ever viewed poem. Please take into consideration that if you don't like my poems, please don't say rude stuff. Thanks SO much Kthxbaii -Chloiih
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