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What Would You Do

I would fly with storm clouds just so I could meet you I would run with hungry lions just to get there faster I would swim through broken glass just to find your heart I don’t want to lose you I would walk on hot coals just to see your face I would jump on a bed of spikes just to hear your voice I would lap a million race cars just to prove I love you I don’t want to lose you The torture you put me through is killing me Crazy thing is I like it I barely know you, but you’re always on my mind I don’t want to lose you I want to tell you in person But you don’t know I exist Change… I don’t want to lose you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/3/2011 11:24:00 PM
I like the feel of this, very subtle yet passionate. Good work here!
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Date: 8/29/2011 11:02:00 PM
Devin, CONGRATULATIONS !! On your poem being featured this week. Stopping by to read every poem on the home page. have yourself a wonderful week,..Linda
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Date: 8/29/2011 11:44:00 AM
congrats devin on your featured pome this week on PS.. a great one to share luv..
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Date: 8/29/2011 10:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine poetry being featured this week Devin. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/21/2011 1:13:00 PM
superbly penned with my best CONGRATS on your big win, devin! :) huggs!
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Date: 7/21/2011 4:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Catie Lindsey's contest "New Free Verse"Devin . Love, Carol
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Date: 7/21/2011 3:42:00 AM
Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, with this wonderful Free Verse, Devin. Elaine
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Date: 7/20/2011 3:23:00 PM
Congrats Devin on your excellent win with this dynamic delight in poetry luv.. enjoy a top ten sweet success with luv..
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