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What Will Make Her Secure

What Will Make Her Secure? The tears that have become her nightly doze of Sleep Her antidote is a husband who CARES The heavy burdens she carries alone make her Weep Her supporting hand is a husband who is FAIR The painful worries of infidelity begets the future to appear bleak Her balm is a husband who exudes TRUST The unconditional love unappreciated with a blow on the cheek Her true worth is a husband whose character does NOT DISGUST The absence of affection's blazing flames Her yearning is a husband who sweeps her of her FEET The verbal abuse that makes her spirit to feel lame Her healing is a husband whose words are SWEET The wishing of a family unit as a lone mother Her bliss is a husband who never quit HOME The constant hurt of second place to another Her mind's comfort is a husband who does NOT ROAM The burning desire to be admired like a Queen Her thirst's quench is a husband who steps up as KING The broken promises, that she has always seen Her security now is a husband who upholds the vows of his wedding RING By H.F. All Rights Reserved Written: 23/11/2011

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Date: 1/5/2012 3:41:00 PM
Terrific write Hussein. Easy to read, easy flow and an endearing message with cultural significance. If I may make a few suggestions - I hope you don't mind. In the 2nd line, I think the word should be "who" and not "whose". Also, I think in the 2nd to last stanza, "minds" should be possisive "mind's" and in the last stanza the same is true for "thirsts" - "thirst's". I enjoyed the poem and the message it convey's. Thanks for sharing.
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Hussein Farah
Date: 1/5/2012 3:47:00 PM
Oh thank you so much,I am here to share and learning. God bless Dear xoxoxo...

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