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What We Leave Behind

I think of those I knew who’ve passed And what they’ve left behind, Impressions that remain engraved In caverns of my mind. Perhaps just an expression Or some laughter we once shared Or a reaching-out connection Where our truest selves were bared. I conjure up some habits That endeared or else annoyed Which, for reasons I don’t know, Have yet to vanish in the void. We write our wills, bequeathing What we treasure to our kin, But the best of us we leave behind Is what resides within.

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Date: 5/29/2023 9:57:00 AM
I seem to have missed this one, as well, Ilene. Mea culpa. An excellent choice for POTD...or any other D for that matter.
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Date: 5/23/2023 1:23:00 PM
belated congratulation on this potd. It's so well written Ilene and rings of truth.
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Date: 5/20/2023 12:38:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD - it is such a great poem my friend!
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Date: 5/15/2023 8:45:00 AM
Truly, we leave behind a piece of ourselves. Congratulations on POTD, Ilene!
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Date: 5/13/2023 7:59:00 PM
Dear Ilene, "the best of us we leave behind, is what resides within." I completely agree. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 5/13/2023 7:46:00 PM
Excellent penning, Ilene. So true! Congrats on POTD! :) gw
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Date: 5/13/2023 3:58:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD Ilene! A flat-out most lovely requiem, eternal remnants of what remains behind, your thoughts on an all-inclusive legacy of ourselves. Happy Mother's Day!
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Date: 5/13/2023 3:54:00 PM
A truly enjoyable read and a well deserved POTD. Congratulations :-)
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Date: 5/13/2023 1:05:00 PM
Ilene, fabulous poem. I love the theme. Written. With wisdom. Congratulations On Your POTD. Stay Creative.
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Date: 5/13/2023 12:07:00 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Ilene :) - hugs
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Date: 5/13/2023 12:03:00 PM
Lovely poem, Ilene and deserving of POTD. It’s not really in the same spirit (and I might have said it before) but there was a shop nearby that had a sign in the window which read, “They say you can’t take it with you… so spend it here and I’ll take it with me,” ;-)
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Date: 5/13/2023 10:58:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful, Ilene. Excellent choice for POTD...or for any other day.
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Date: 5/13/2023 9:47:00 AM
A stunning piece! Congratulations on your POTD! It certainly touches the spaces of our humanity. Great Write! Paulette
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Date: 5/13/2023 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations! Great news. -Pangie
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Date: 5/13/2023 7:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Ilene. A very well-written and sincere poem. I agree with your thoughts on what we leave behind. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 5/13/2023 7:29:00 AM
Ilene, such a beautifully penned and emotional poem, I can relate to it very much and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, a FAV for m also !
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Date: 5/13/2023 7:21:00 AM
Wonderful poem- Congratulations on POTD.-Well deserved.~Warrem
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Date: 5/13/2023 7:07:00 AM
Congratulations, Dear Ilene, on your POTD honour. Your reflections are so true, and so very special - the last line beautifully sums up everything. Happy Mother's Day!
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Date: 5/13/2023 6:21:00 AM
Hi Ilene, What a well-written reflective write. Your last line resonated with me so well. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day;-) Alexis
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Date: 5/13/2023 6:04:00 AM
Love love this Ilene ! That last line rings so very true . Big hugs and congratulations on your POTD ! Susan :)
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Date: 5/13/2023 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations Ilene on a wonderfully pragmatic and philosophical POTD, cheers David
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Date: 5/13/2023 5:58:00 AM
Ilene, a wonderful poem, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 5/13/2023 5:45:00 AM
A lovely sentiment Ilene. Congratulations on POTD! :)
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Date: 5/13/2023 5:02:00 AM
Congratulations Ilene on POTD:) You already know I like the poem. Have a wonderful Mother's Day weekend:)
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Date: 5/13/2023 3:55:00 AM
Great poem, Ilene, and how true. Congrats on potd! Regal, John.
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