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Long night. Sleepless. I heard an owl, its call filtering through the tall trees, writing itself on the lush silence. Other sounds followed reverently, a moth whispering its powdery presence somewhere in the room, then, the soft padded footsteps of a possum walking gently across the rooftop of an evening back into silence. I tapped into the private conversations the house was having with itself, the creaks and groans, the stifled gurgle bubbled up from a troubled pipe and from downstairs, an unknown bump that gave no hint of cause. The house carried on with this chatter for hours then fell quiet and perfectly still. Later, I heard the dampened throb of a locomotive coming in and out of earshot as it skirted the far reaches of the dawn, then a screech of car brakes from a nearby street causing the nerves to brace. Too soon morning comes with its hurry, erasing the silence upon which this was written. Time now for sleep.

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Date: 8/8/2023 7:34:00 AM
Ooh I like this. Who hasn't been kept up on an anxious night by various sounds and imaginings? Strangely though, I do rather like the sound of a train whistle at night
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Paul Willason
Date: 8/10/2023 6:10:00 AM
Ah a train whistle...agree...however these days more like a blast from a horn with laryngitis. Thankyou Tom for your kind words,, Very much valued. Regards, Paul
Date: 8/8/2023 6:14:00 AM
A testament to those who need noise of some sort to nod off. Often, I've fallen asleep with the TV on and at 3 am, when it's off air, the silence wakes me. Poetically, superb with mention of the house conversing with itself. For those of us who are awake when others sleep, we DO hear every groan and gurgle of our homes. In my case, pine cones falling on the roof.
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Paul Willason
Date: 8/10/2023 6:05:00 AM
Thanks Lin. Always find that silence provides the perfect backgound for giving each sound its clarity....although a pine cone would be a bit alarming...afraid that one night a big branch could be attached to it. Regards
Date: 8/8/2023 5:48:00 AM
Beautiful Paul, it casts me into memories of my own of seeking far off sounds that exist in apparent silence, there's a beauty in being awake in the night that's unfortunately spoiled by the knowledge of how sleep deprivation will impact on the next day x
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Paul Willason
Date: 8/10/2023 5:57:00 AM
Thanks for your comments DD. At least I have the luxury of not having to adhere to a timetable....too old for that. Take care, Paul

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