What Was I Thinking

believing leopards could have changed their spots ~ just because they said "bygones"

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2023 8:43:00 PM

Ahhhh. Yes that sure happenes. Congrats on a job well done

Terry Flood

Date: 9/29/2023 4:40:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Lin… even though I missed the hidden message ;-)

Lin Lane
Date: 9/29/2023 5:02:00 PM

Thanks for your congrats, Terry. It wasn’t lost on those who are leopards.

Terry Miller

Date: 9/27/2023 8:09:00 AM

Great Monoku; congratulations

Lin Lane
Date: 9/29/2023 5:01:00 PM

Thanks very much for the kind comment, Terry.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/21/2023 10:03:00 PM

Great Monoku Lin, I might point out when snakes shed their skin, is simply with a new skin, nothing changes whatsoever, we have an illustration of that right here, that man never learns.

Lin Lane
Date: 9/21/2023 11:03:00 PM

Thanks, Arthur but there is a change that takes place… the snake becomes a bigger snake.

Bill Baker

Date: 9/21/2023 3:43:00 PM

I like your Monoku, Lin, well-written to form. Have a pleasant week, my friend. Bill

Lin Lane
Date: 9/21/2023 4:06:00 PM

Merci, Bill. You have a good weekend, and a winner at the track. I've been going since I was 10

Jan Allison

Date: 9/20/2023 12:58:00 PM

Yeah their behavior's is still the same as it was over all their previous re-incarnations. I for one won't be bullied by him Lin and I know you won't either. hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 9/20/2023 1:03:00 PM

Nada, Jan and thank you. I prefer to ignore, but if pushed, even the tiniest creature defends itself. I love writing, Monoku!