What Tweety Saw

~~~What Tweety Saw, ( Or Did)~~~


I taught I taw dat ole putty cat
stick his tail in a socket, like dat.
His eyes bulged like a cow,
His hair isn't sleek now,
Uh oh ! look what he did on the mat!







for Carolyn and Alexa's techno-lilmerick contest
8/11/2011
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A Fledgling Poet Avatar
December 16, 2011 at 8:35 PM
Francine, Wow this is Great, who does not know "Tweety" I would wish You luck but I think Your Talent will Surfice. A Quick Question - When I click on your name in the soup mail you sent, it goes to Your Poems. When I click on Your name after I write You a Soup mail, nothing happens; Why?? Your still Francine Roberts. My deepest Respects, A Fledgling Poet -kenny
A Fledgling Poet Avatar
December 16, 2011 at 8:37 PM
Francine, Congratulations on Your Win. I just read Your Comments Recieved -kenny
Fraser Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 1:36 PM
Many congratulations Francine on your win in the Techno contest with this fine Limerick :)
Pettit Avatar
November 29, 2011 at 9:30 PM
Mel Blanc would have applauded you for this limerick if he were alive today. Tweety used to call Sylvester a "putty tat". Remember how he used to say "I taught I taw a putty tat"?
Brown Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 11:40 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Techno-Limerick contest Francine. Love, Carol
Susan Avatar
November 15, 2011 at 8:26 AM
this is awesome francine! i can hear tweety speaking perfectly - funny ending too, lol :) congrats on your win!
Goudreau Avatar
November 14, 2011 at 8:51 PM
This is so awesome and so very well created! Million thx for sharing. You brought a smile to my lips as I read you. You are amazing!
A   Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 1:03 AM
FRANCINE~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, WITH YOUR entry FOR CAROLYN, TECHNO LIMERICK* Have a wonderful VETERANS DAY @;- GOD BLESS,..p.d.
Dietrich Avatar
November 10, 2011 at 8:01 PM
hahaha, this is FANTASTIC, Francine. Congratulatons!!
Freeman Avatar
November 10, 2011 at 5:05 PM
Nice ideal on your limerick Francine, Congratulations, quite worthy dear. Agape, Moses
Song Avatar
November 10, 2011 at 4:15 PM
You are in complete character thru out each and every word here, Francine. Completely Loooney Tuney!! Congrats to u and this creative write. I hope I don't hear this character's voice inside my head all night while I am at work trying to attempt being serious. Luv, Gwendolen
The Rogue Rhymer Avatar
November 10, 2011 at 10:10 AM
I love your Tweetie poem Francine! Congrats. on your win :)
Sweetheart Avatar
November 10, 2011 at 10:01 AM
Congrats Francine on a wonderful win for this Limerick contest ...cleverly crafted luv..
Richards Avatar
November 10, 2011 at 8:30 AM
Yep....sounds like Sylvester has "literally" messed up once again! What a fun poem, Francine! Congrats!!
Devonshire Avatar
November 10, 2011 at 8:15 AM
Francine, this is soo funny. Congratulations on your third place in our contest. The competition was stiff, so all who placed had to be in the top tier of both Alexa's and my rankings. We both sure got a laugh reading this one! Love the characters and the humor employed in your entry. Love, Carolyn
Johnson Avatar
November 9, 2011 at 7:42 PM
Very good limerick, puddy cat, he got hit with a brik, sometime...
Brown Avatar
November 9, 2011 at 7:09 AM
The best to you in the contest Francine and always. Love, Carol
The Rogue Rhymer Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 5:50 PM
Cute one Francine!!!
Lane Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 11:49 AM
Thufferin' thuckatash. Tony
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