What the Cardinal Saw In the Clouds

Is that a Robin in the Nimbus, I see or perhaps a large chickadee? Why there’s an assembly of foul progeny, in that gargantuan, puffball sea, that seem to be mocking me. Oh, who populates those thunderheads? I see not one, cardinal of red. That vaporous curtain, how it embeds, images within my head; I’ve seen this before at Hilton-Head. I see no ravens, no peacocks or grouse; in that megalith of cloudy house; There’s not even a flying mouse! oh my, those are dark, murky clouds and I’d best fly off before I’m doused.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 12:46 AM
Darling poem. Made me so happy. Such imagery and then whimsy!
Kiser Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 12:53 PM
It was fun, thanks.
Adams Avatar
August 17, 2019 at 9:01 PM
What a witty and cute poem. Thanks for the giggles. We have lots of birds here and the little hummingbird seems to like to hover near my face now and I wonder what he sees and thinks :) hugs
Kiser Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 7:02 PM
You're welcome, I am glad that you got a smile out of it.
Allison Avatar
August 17, 2019 at 4:22 PM
we have had inclement weather here ML so not seen many birds flying today. love the imagery here and the humour too in the final stanza:-) hugs Jan xx
Kiser Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 7:02 PM
Many thanks.
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