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What She Had Hoped For

The older lady used words that no one remembered. We were not sure if they were mean or glad. But they spewed out in crazy ways. Hitting people in their faces Clawing at their eyes. Smacking us in our noses. Maybe they are bad words my uncle suggested. He was a sailor, so he recognized the connotation. The content was an anomaly. We smiled at her, hoping she would give us a clue. She could not. She had forgotten their meaning But she adored the reactions that she received. They were what she had hoped for.

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Date: 4/12/2022 6:18:00 PM
That Iowa gal must have had a case of meandering morphemes! ~ Lachrymose, laconic linguist (whatever that means! :) gw
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Date: 4/11/2022 5:25:00 PM
..."it's not what ya say....it's how ya say it"
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/11/2022 10:31:00 PM
Exactly write!
Date: 4/11/2022 4:54:00 PM
This is so hilarious. I can visualize it. Their consternation and her unabashed joy!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/11/2022 10:31:00 PM
I know this woman.

Book: Shattered Sighs