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crying can give some relief to a heart filled with grief moaning and tears ease the pain in our souls where sorrows are lain mourning is sharing in pain with the loss weeping with tears at boundaries we cannot cross bewailing torment the ultimate cost agonys foul measure for countless sins newly remembered nothing to place inside the void no gold or silver could bring joy humbled and broken we beseech God help us on this bitter road we trod

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Date: 10/1/2008 1:42:00 PM
Tears and grief with God's help can renew us. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 9/21/2008 12:31:00 AM
You tell it as it sometimes is John.Rgds Brian & thanks for your comment
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Date: 9/20/2008 9:42:00 AM
Very emotional. Tugs deeply at my heart. No indeed, it is not the material things that ease our pain. Wishing you well. Love, Shar
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Date: 9/18/2008 5:16:00 PM
hi Mr. Loving, what a heartwrenching write, this one stirs my senses, hopefully and always with God's help we can be renewed and restored, and I would like to thank you for your uplifting comments, thank you always, D-nyce
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Date: 9/18/2008 5:12:00 PM
This one speaks to the heart. Very well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 9/17/2008 5:15:00 PM
John a very powerful write - I have always believed that it is our tears that keep our souls soft - This poem is very well written - very deep thoughts and feelings -God Bless
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