What My Dark Knight Wrought

My love for him I’d finally abjure. My grief was brief ; he was a heartless fake. But what my dark knight wrought will long endure. He flew in on a steed, a soul cocksure, A vision that I even now can’t shake. My love for him I’d finally abjure. No humble cavalier, but saboteur, He bore a two-edged blade and was a rake. But what my dark knight wrought will long endure. A grin, black eyes that burned me through - his lure. And when he spoke, I felt my body quake. My love for him I’d finally abjure. My sense of what was right, though grown obscure, I managed to maintain and not forsake. But what my dark knight wrought will long endure. Could passion that he breathed have been my cure? Unlikely. . . but I reveled in the ache. My love for him I’d finally abjure, But what my dark knight wrought will long endure.
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February 13, 2011 at 5:19 AM
This is another wonderful write from you.It seems this poem won the 1st place in the contest(from the comments bellow)---congrats!!----kash
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July 6, 2010 at 7:00 AM
No surprise here, Andrea! Congratulations! Always enjoy your poems. A pleasure to read. Thanks for your kind comments, always. Love, Audrey
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July 4, 2010 at 1:08 PM
wonderful very much deserved congrats :D
Devonshire Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 2:38 PM
First place and first class writing all the way. Congratulations, Andrea! Love, Carolyn
Adeite Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 12:47 PM
Andrea. "mom" Great entry and a worthy win. Enjoy your winnings. keep up the great work mom. Love, Adeleke
Green Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 9:01 AM
Wow, this actually gave me the chills. Excellent piece, and congrats on a well deserved 1st place.
Richards Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 8:12 AM
Outstanding poem, Andrea!!!! A sure fire win! Sounds like the rake deserved a shake.....and you had much at stake....but survived the heartbreak!!! Hooray for your number 1 spot...indeed well deserved!! :) Hugs!!
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July 3, 2010 at 6:30 AM
Awesome Victory.. congrats my dear friend on your first place win..so well deserved ..so well written ..such depth and majesty to this piece.. enjoy Andrea.. u are finally recognized by your peers as a great poetess which I always knew.. your are on top baby..enjoy .. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..watching fireworks at 3 a.m.. AlohA...
Winter Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 5:55 AM
I knew it - and so well deserved! Warm congrats! love, shar xoxo
George   Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 4:02 AM
Congratulations on your first place win, Andrea. This is a SENSATIONAL villanelle. Love, Lainie
Freeman Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 11:03 PM
Congratulations Andrea, on your ace in Dr Ram's Contest. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 10:36 PM
Congrats for the first place in my contest
Johnson Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 10:10 PM
Great poem and first place Congratulations. Love, Joyce
K. Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 9:39 PM
I was right--Super super win, Andrea!! First place to you--woohoo!! this was amazing and very well deserved :) --super congrats!!-- nikko :)
Winter Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 8:41 AM
Whoa! You are seriously amazing - and I am not just saying that! Absolutely brilliant. Would not be surprised if you are #1 with this gem! Thank you lovely Andrea for your kind and thoughtful words. You are such a sweetheart and I am dearly grateful. You lift my spirits with your generosity and it means more than you know : )). love and hugs, shar xoxo
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June 14, 2010 at 8:28 AM
This one is great too, Andrea! I think either one would do very well in the contest. Excellent use of the form! Love, Carolyn
Clark Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 4:52 PM
Oh the rogue......always an interesting subject!!! Nice! Jeralynn
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June 13, 2010 at 5:36 AM
Great write, I love this subject Love Roger
George   Avatar
June 10, 2010 at 11:14 AM
A number 1 for sure. Such vivid imagery. Lainie
Guzzi Avatar
June 9, 2010 at 2:13 PM
ohhhhhh yes! shades of Irish ballades mama! You are in your element! Light & Love sweetie...read my Undign=nified Death please?
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June 9, 2010 at 1:35 AM
I sure learned a new word today Andrea--heehee had to look up what "abjure" meant--didn't have the brains to read through the context clues...I liked it better and better as I reread it, can't help but think of better to have love and lost (or should I say abjure here?) then to not have loved at all--very intriguing villanelle, Andrea--& wishing you the best, I'm sure it's gonna be in the winner's list --nikko :)
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June 7, 2010 at 6:04 PM
Andrea, this is a story I can relate to. There is a lot of effort involved when pain helps you grow. The refrain seems to help portray the agony. Am I right? Thank-you for your comment. I intend to post another poem about the oil spill today. I can't help but ponder it.
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June 7, 2010 at 5:06 PM
Good entry, good luck with the contest....Karla
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June 7, 2010 at 3:25 PM
must have been difficult. john
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June 7, 2010 at 2:37 PM
sounds like a long journey your dark night took you on.great thoughts, seems kind of emotional. ah, i really need to post a new poem. my mind is every where. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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